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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-20 01:16 PM


Have You Ever

Have you ever been on a flight to heaven to hear the angels sing
And knocked on Love's door and heard her shout come on in
Have you ever touched a unicorn and gazed at his horn of gold
Or seen the smile of an angel and been given her hand to hold
Have you ever breathed in the scent that flows from loves' heart
Or noticed the truth and beauty when love's just about to start

Have you ever felt this wonder that I find whenever you touch me
And feel the heat of passion, which somehow sets me wildly free
Have you ever traveled around the universe stopping off on Mars
Or gone dancing on the moonbeams and played among the stars
Have you never seen the angels sighing softly as you walk on by
Or felt the stars were shining far more brightly in your sky

Have you heard the breeze whispering your name as she flows by
And felt the sun caress and touch before she lifts you up high
Do your ears hear the clouds calling you as they drift in the blue
And do you feel the love that flows and runs from me to you
Have you not seen us waiting to taste your air, drinking it all in sips
Or marveled that the angels collect the words that fall from your lips

I doubt if you notice all the wonders that daily surround you
Or if you do you think that they are for someone else more true
These marvels and miracles are all there because of who you are
While angels of pure love surround you from both near and far
Your voice is the sound they and I desparately need to always hear
For you are the reason, the light which drives away the lonely fear




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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1 posted 2000-12-20 01:30 PM


I'm afraid you have the "have you's" quite seriously my friend!  LOL...this is a wonderful piece, and I shall keep this for sure...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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2 posted 2000-12-20 02:20 PM


You are definitely riding the tail of one fantastic comet my friend.  I would say that you are on the ride of your life for sure.  Wonderful write and the visions are equally as wonderful.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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3 posted 2000-12-20 02:24 PM


Kari love, yes love I'd say it was a terminal case. I better take myself off to I T U, although I know there won't be a bed for me love. They don't let staff lie down too often, (I heard of someone dying and them leaning the body against a wall, but I think they were joking   )

Thank you sweetie,  
Take care
                Majestic Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Marsha
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4 posted 2000-12-20 02:32 PM


Mark my dear friend, thank you kindly, I'm sorry you seem to have slipped in while I was doing what I get paid for.   I know I shouldn't try doing more than one thing at a time but I thought it was going to be q....
Obviously thought thought thought wrong.
Thank you, Mmmmm I think it may well be a very exciting ride  
Take care
                 Mushy
                    
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-20-2000).]

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5 posted 2000-12-20 04:59 PM


loved it!!!!!!
Marsha
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6 posted 2000-12-20 06:54 PM


Vandana, thank you muchly,  
  
Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2000-12-20 07:37 PM


Yes, I have... through reading your poetry.  Like a dream, you have taken me on a wonderful fantasy.  Thank you and keep up the sweet dreams.    Bob <><
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8 posted 2000-12-21 05:14 AM


Bob, Hi there, thank you very kindly, that is a very sweet thing to say, and I do appreciate it. I really do
Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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9 posted 2000-12-21 05:58 AM


A beautiful celestial journey Marsha.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


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10 posted 2000-12-21 07:20 AM


You know Marsha I wouldn't expect anything different from you. I've read the other comments and I agree with them all but it's more than that too..it's just that despite all the romance you have written, you are just such a lovable character that if someone (who you have explained has) fell in love with you these endearing qualities you express would draw them even closer to you... and you know something...that's my story and I'm sticking to it....take care    ethome
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11 posted 2000-12-21 12:07 PM


John R, Thank you very muchly
Take care
              Mushy
P T, I'll be back to answer you love I'm being pushed off so the MOOPAS can get to their poem.
(Okay team I'm going I'm going, good grief have some patience please)
Take care
               Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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12 posted 2000-12-21 12:24 PM


Marsha~
Awwwwwwwww !
I think I saw a Unicorn once !
NO .. I really did !
Well, I heard his horn anyway !

You have so much fun ... (at work yet)
Pssst ... I think the patient in 210-B is ringing !
LOL at you gals !
Delightful !
~*Marge*~


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Marsha
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13 posted 2000-12-21 02:12 PM


P T, sorry about that they come back from the Christmas lunch, in the canteen yet. (No wonder they were serving brandy didn't want anyone to taste the turkey or anything else I think) And very rumbustious they were too. That must have also been the brandy. Perhaps I ought to put an announcement out, and advise anyone who is having an op this evening to count their limbs when they get back. Mmmm.
That has got to be the sweetest thing you've ever said love. (Okay I take it you want Rosalie then   )
Lovable kid are you sure. Okay I'll take the compliment, and just say thank you nicely. So Thank you nicely. (Although I'd love to know whom is impersonating me when ever they get a chance.    
Anyway thank you love I do mean it, no throw away line or anything truly I do mean it.
Take care kid love to you and if you're standing under any misteltoe here's a Christmas kiss xxx (Or in this case three)
                Mushy

Margie girl, YOU would fit right in I know, You could take my bosses place, he doesn't like us. (I can't imagine why, unless it's that whenever he appears in the office productivity along with morale hits the skids.)And it looks like finally someone has noticed, apart from us that is.  
Thank you love.
You heard his horn did you love   I won't tell you what I was thinking but I'm sure you know.   Yes I will I touched it   that's how I knew   Okay I'll be good I promise.
Love to you take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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