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serenity's song of longing
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serenity's song of longing |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Your thoughts meet mine like quartered rhyme. (If I could dance, I'd dance for you...) Wish you could play piano, so I could sing the blues. Wish I could take my pen-- re-write the truth untrue. Wish I could light a candle, and incantate "Undo..." If I could summon angels, I'd send every one to you. If you would play piano, I'd have no need of blues. (from Open #5) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wish I could take my pen-- re-write the truth untrue. Wish I could light a candle, and incantate "Undo..." If I could summon angels, I'd send every one to you. ====================== mirrors baby....more mirrors... and ya know your looking good... but then you always do when you candle dancing ...  keep posting em..i collect em ya know *kisskiss* me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, absolutely lovely! Rewrite true untrue...what a wonderful if we could do it 'just for some things' we'd love undone that we'd done.You are a wondrous poet! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ The songing of longing rings so true captured in the rhyme of you Sing on sing true There is no need for shaded blue Within your song of sing-along captured in the notes of thee Ah, she said please ... play for me ... You know if it sings - I loved it !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sadness wrapped in such beauty. My heart goes out to you. Much love and Christmas hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: you mean you can't? just haunting my friend. . . I know that I've wished that I could do this too. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Poeminister--thank you for smile...I loved it!!! Play it again..sam.... JM---you're just wonderful!!! Not to mention an inspiration...thank you, just for being. Marge...no words to thank you. You are such a lady! Startime...your heart? For me? A sweet Christmas gift indeed! Thank you! Sven...Hmmm...may have to e you on the Enochian magic thing...grin...have a wondrous Solstice this evening...I will include you in my prayers. Thank you and hugs. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very heart felt writing. I enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work. Love and light, Richard |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
As always, it is a pleasure to read your works. By the way, I though I was the only one who could summon angels...now if I could only keep them around. Well done. The White Wolf |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah serenity, now, this is what I like, twisting the words to form opposite of the meanings... well done little one! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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