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Passions Gallery--Toerag (Toerag's Song)
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Passions Gallery--Toerag (Toerag's Song) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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may I present Toerag the poet indeed the best, and don't you know it! in all of Passions there is none as he and he won't even charge you a fee! he has fought monsters without any fear battled LngJhn and his nemesis Balladeer! fought them bravely with long flowing strokes until the very end saying "That's all folks!" he was not born, but came into being that way he avoided that babyish teething came to this world much more than a man he came as Toerag for that was the plan and in his coming did the people rejoice "All Hail Toerag!" they cried with one voice they cheered and cheered and then cheered more moving him deeply, yea, to his core then did the bells peal loud and pealed long they rang and they rang indeed quite strong and then did his hand verily smash the clock from his dream he did wake, yes with a shock! yes my friends, it was only a dream and seeing this, he was really steamed! so, my friends, what did he, our Toerag do? he went back to sleep, wouldn't you? ----------------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Toerag is so loved.....this is wonderful Sven.....great job  -SEA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Splendiforous...he will enjoy this! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Not a dream at all! LOL. For he IS the best (in spite of LJA's and Balladeer's attempts to slander such excellence *G*) ... and he can't seem to shake this suthern cheering section! *G* (although I might more accurately be called his own personal nightmare. *G*) I love this, Sven... it's a very nice tribute to one of this world's finest beings. *S* |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i confess i havent read him yet but i like him already... seems like a thing i would do..go back to sleep!!LOL  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sven you have written of Toerag, and yes he is a poet. But I wonder who's dream he started from, or maybe it was their nightmare.Oh don't be surprised if you don't get a bill from him. I think he does charge a fee, just for writing about him. [This message has been edited by inot2B (edited 12-21-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, thank you my friend. . . he is indeed loved by all. . . Sunshine, thank you. . . I hope so. . . suthern, glad that you enjoyed. . . and with a cheering section like you, he will indeed be the best for a long time. . . kaile, I hope that you do read him. . . he's a great person. . . and thank you. . . inot2B, I'll be expecting the bill. . . LOL. . .  . . . thanks for reading. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, you had me cheering then, right up to the end when I found out Toerag was allowed to go back to sleep,...and I ask who allowed this thing, when we are all working our tails off... Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I can't wait to see how he loves this one!!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This piece is just Buzzing with Toeraggy fun...  |
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