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She Opens Her Eyes
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She Opens Her Eyes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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She Opens Her Eyes She opens her eyes and looks at him in restful pose he lays at her side and she wonders what dreams fill his sleep as he breathes deep in peaceful slumber The morning light flows across his face with a gentle glow of golden light showing her the sweetness that is him this man who fills her life with his love A sigh escapes her lips as she sends silent prayer of thanks to God for Love that has warmed her heart with new hope and set her heart beating once again His face is so gentle and serene brings a smile to light her face as she reaches out with tenderness to touch this man who has brought to her such joy She closes her eyes as she moves close wanting to feel the warm of him near letting the serenity fill her, She opens her eyes from a sweet dream Karen Torbiak© 2000 Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Too lovely a dream from which to awaken. Dreams are merely wishes of the heart made in the quiet of the night. Dream on ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karen, this is a beautiful dream, hold on to them they can truly become reality, if your faith is strong enough. And you will find someone I know. Wonderful writing from you love really excellant take care Mushy Marsha  Have a great Christmas Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
just wonderful Karen. . . beautiful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Startime, Beautiful, I loved this wonder. Excellent write. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Startime, this poem of yours just whispers to me the beauty of a heart and soul in the weave... Lovely write PoetLady... Thank you for the enjoyable read... coco |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This dream defines love, Startime.. Very nice indeed..  |
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