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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2000-12-20 08:49 PM

I will come to you,
when your eyes are raining,
and your tears are colored blue

Speak through crimson
fire as it moves through
whispers that you hear in the wind

To dance upon your spring of
imagination, to tremble
as I touch you with words

I think your thoughts
in fields of shared moonlight
and your intimate passion

My lips are only
as far, as the comfort
you feel when you hear me
speak, you must hear me?

To remember my softness
pressed against your soul
as you call me lover
in the darkness of night

To paint the picture of
your dreams, a desire to
burn into your eyes, to behold
your memory of time, our time

To seduce your mind when
you need strength to climb
your mountains, or be the eagle
that will carry you down

The ocean will never be too far
for me to swim when I hear the
calling of your heart, as the tides
will bring me to your shore

when ever you need, for what ever
time it may be

I will come to you

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-12-20 09:05 PM

Pretty picture, pretty poem...well done...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

2 posted 2000-12-20 09:18 PM

Beautiful poem, Your words speak of a love transending all obsticles.

P.S. I just love your signiture quote.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

3 posted 2000-12-20 09:21 PM

Very good poem, I enjoyed the read.
love and light,
Richard

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2000-12-20 09:55 PM

Sweet Lady, Oh how I have missed your words,
the passion and beauty......and the love you show. Hugs sweet friend.

On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-12-20 10:38 PM

wonderful Greeneyes. . . just like a dream. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-12-21 12:28 PM

Speak through crimson
fire as it moves through
whispers that you hear in the wind
=================
To remember my softness
pressed against your soul
as you call me lover
in the darkness of night

To paint the picture of
your dreams, a desire to
burn into your eyes, to behold
your memory of time, our time
=================

this is wonderful...
the imagery laced emotions are enchanting ...
this is a lovely poetic promise GE,
well written and expressed
take care
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

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