Open Poetry #11 |
The insides of me |
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Inside of me In commotion thrown on waves birthed of a tropical depression far distant off this shore of present life where prayers on behalf of seamen lost are only wishes held to the winds carrying me to a faithless hope in the religion of self Robert |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: Excellent line! Thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
we all have to find hope and faith within ourselves..sometimes its hard but we have to in order to be strong..and have the strength to carry on.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
You make a wonderful impression with your writing. Most enjoyed. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
carrying me to a faithless hope in the religion of self Robert? you've got a remarkable talent for saying so much in a few lines...a sort of minimalist approach that give the reader room to ponder...I enjoy your work much!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have been searching for that religion of self...it's hard to find some days, if at all...thank you for your thoughts (*this picture is very nice*) ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Sunshine, I am glad you found a favorite line. In a short poem I think it is important to put as much as one can in few words. I am not a wordy poet. I get bored too easily with myself I guess. * Victoria, I like the quote you have as a sig file. I think finally a poem must be abandoned. PS: I have the search for hope. * JohnR I am glad you enjoy reading...I will keep trying. * Serenity, as always you say such nice things. * Wynter....keep the faith Baby!!!! Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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