Open Poetry #11 |
Forsake The Dawn |
John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Forsake The Dawn Could it be just a dream where realities spawn? If so, then give me dreams, I will forsake the dawn. For passion speaks of want and need and love becomes this dreamer’s creed. My love will embrace everlasting night. I fear I must wait, for what comes first light? What dreams may come shall not forsake. From dream’s soothsay my love I take. Now close my eyes I will not sleep. In reverie my mind will keep. For dreams of you will fill my night. Until the dawn returns my plight. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! This is fantastic, John! Very beautiful! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Full of love and desire, well done! Corinne |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
dsnyder~~~Thank you for the kind words Corinne~~~Always desire it burns in my soul If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope we see much more of this...I could learn from you... this likes me so much...thank you for sharing.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh yes...another to touch my spirit...You write very well, John R....I, too know the longing that makes for a sleepless night. Keep 'em rolling, John! |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Sunshine~~~ We all can learn from each other, I find very much talent posting here. Thank You. Serenity~~~~ Thank you again for your kind words If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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