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Open Poetry #11

Forsake The Dawn

John R
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since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

0 posted 2000-12-20 07:56 PM

Forsake The Dawn

Could it be just a dream
where realities spawn?
If so, then give me dreams,
I will forsake the dawn.

For passion speaks
of want and need
and love becomes
this dreamer’s creed.

My love will embrace
everlasting night.
I fear I must wait,
for what comes first light?

What dreams may come
shall not forsake.
From dream’s soothsay
my love I take.

Now close my eyes
I will not sleep.
In reverie
my mind will keep.

For dreams of you
will fill my night.
Until the dawn
returns my plight.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-12-20 08:36 PM

Wow! This is fantastic, John! Very beautiful!

Denise

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2000-12-20 08:57 PM

Full of love and desire, well done!

Corinne

John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

3 posted 2000-12-20 10:37 PM

dsnyder~~~Thank you for the kind words

Corinne~~~Always desire it burns in my soul

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2000-12-20 11:22 PM

I hope we see much more of this...I could learn from you...

this likes me so much...thank you for sharing....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-12-21 12:34 PM

Oh yes...another to touch my spirit...You write very well, John R....I, too know the longing that makes for a sleepless night.

Keep 'em rolling, John!

John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

6 posted 2000-12-21 01:32 AM

Sunshine~~~ We all can learn from each other, I find very much talent posting here. Thank You.

Serenity~~~~ Thank you again for your kind words

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John

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