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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-12-20 04:14 AM

A drop on an angel
in silent fields
dreamt only when passed
of hopes we all had.
Flowers we see
illuminate their dreams
compare our hopes
to the tears shed.
Of a western wind
on field of dust
lazy hills control
our heavens far hopes.
Just to listen
to the dreams begin
as the dust comes up
and settles our spirit.
One more drop
falls to grace below
and captures the sigh
from this hollowed ground.
Of the angel that sits
on guard of his soul
the world shall look
as the vision clouds.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-12-20 01:26 PM

Beautifully resounding silence in this wonderful piece and so very worthy of future reads. I don't know how it went this long without a reply but I am putting this one in my library.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-12-20 02:06 PM

Thank God for Angels to watch over us.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2000-12-20 11:11 PM

such a quiet, shhhh type of poem...as if waiting for the whisp of an angel's wing...

thank you...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2000-12-21 12:52 PM

This is a beautiful and soft piece you've written Sunshine...brilliant piece!

Nathan

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2000-12-21 12:57 PM

Michael,
they are there, believe me.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

6 posted 2000-12-21 12:57 PM

Michael,
they are there, believe me.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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