Open Poetry #11 |
Amor es la pan de la vida (like Doreen said - ya gotta read it) |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Amor es la pan de la vida In life everything that I need Amor es la copa divina The wine divine where I feed In moonlight we dance on the stars In swaying beat our feet feed on its beams No words spoke yet lips find no bars Holding close all is met in our schemes Y estoy obsesionado contigo My eyes glow with feelings that you know Y el mundo es testigo To the passions that grow so Por alto este el cielo en el mundo We’ll soar in a romantic swan boat Por hondo que este el mar profundo Till we disappear like a dust mote Amor es la pan de la vida Your my life’s bread where I feed Amor es la copa divina You’re in my blood when I bleed Y estoy obsesionado contigo My eyes glow with feelings that you know Y el mundo es testigo Surrender to me in this glow When we do the best that we can, we never know what miracle is wrought in our life, or in the life of another. ~ Helen Keller ~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
El amante es el pan de la vida....such al corazón que vierte fuera de la < !signature-->emoción y las sensaciones.....you saben que gocé de la manera que usted utilizó español e inglés.... Hermosa Cuenta heres what it reads, I am rusty in the language dept hope this came close...*LOL* Love is the bread of life....such a heart pouring out of emotion and feelings.....you know I enjoyed the way you used spanish and english.... Beautiful Bill Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 12-20-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Well - I'm no 'frenchy' - so I had to depend on the only romantic language with which I have any familiariy ~G~ - thanks Greeneyes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely...... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill, mi amigo, estan bonita la palabra de amor. (you can laugh if I said this wrong) |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
I don't speak Spanish but the melding of the flow from language to language is superb. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's beautiful...... really lovely! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I get so frustrated by my lack of French especially as the language is so curiously formed - I can't even say the words aloud and get proper rhymes - so many letters are 'silent' after "Je vous aime" and "oui" - I haven't a "sou" (sp?) Math I can handle - but even German- the language of my antecedents I barely got through in HS - All that said - Karilea- Martie- John R - Doreen- The spanish lines are directly 'lifted' from the lyrics to "Obsesion" (Obsession) a beautiful Rumba by Pedro Flores. I post the entire lyric (Spanish AND English) here for those who find Spanish as difficult as I find French: Por alto este el cielo en el mundo Por hondo que este el mar profundo No Habra una barrera en el mundo Que un amor profundo No pueda romper Amor es la pan de la vida Amor es la copa divina Amor es un algo sin nombre Que obsesiona un hombre Con una mujer. Y estoy obsesionado contigo Y el mundo es testigo De mi frenisi Y por mas que se oponga el destino Seras para mi, para mi Por alto este el cielo en el mundo Por hondo que este el mar profundo No Habra una barrera en el mundo Que mi amor profundo No rompa por ti As high as the sky is over the world As deep as the sea is There is no barrier in the world That a deep love Cannot break Love is the bread of the life Love is the cup divine Love is something nameless That it obsesses a man With a woman And I am obsessed with you And the world is witness To my frenzy And more because it is destiny You will be for me, for me As high as the sky is over the world As deep as the sea is There is no barrier in the world That my deep love Cannot break |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I would love to have those words whispered softy in my ear...this is lovely sir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't know whether I've got this right but here goes.."Amora es la copa divina" is reading wonderfully imaginative poetry like this...write up a storm my friend this one is very classy work!! |
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