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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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When you look in the mirror do your eyes turn away? When it all becomes clearer will you know what to say? When your smile has faded what will you have then? When your eyes become jaded will your heart feel again? Can you live when you know that your name brings disgust to the one who loved you so- who gave you his trust? Do you think that your right; what you did justified? Can you still sleep at night when your silence has lied? All the good times forgotten deep in you deceit. Your memory’s rotten from hatred and heat. When you dance in the fire your bound to get burned. You can think me the liar …accusations self earned. |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Very powerful write. So deep... beautifully written with a talented pen. Superb write! --Cassandra |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thank you cass, lots of emotion in this |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
POwerful writing and tough questions asked. enjoyed the read. "In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin, poweful write my friend!! loved this, I did...excellent. One of my favorite pieces of yours but then again I adore all your work. So much emotion you weaved into this. take care. ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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