Open Poetry #11 |
Living Inside a Snowglobe |
Sunshine
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Living Inside A SnowGlobe I love the magic of this day cold to colder still living inside a magic snowglobe giving me a thrill crystal white flakes falling down all around this house making me feel so very small like a Christmas mouse now if I gently use imagination and giggle in my soul why then you can shake me up and shake this snowy cold and 'round and 'round silver slivers will fly these sparkling crystal flakes the chill wind will then lift to sky just by your very shake so shake my snowglobe merrily give me a little thrill better yet come and sing me happily and warm away the chill 10 December 2000 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I love your mind Karilea! The title alone had me smiling ... what a wonderful poem this is! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I looked and looked for a little mouse in a globe, and all I could find was this little angel... Maybe she feels the same way.. Nice job, Kari.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is delicious, and a wonderful delightful read, I really love the idea of you living in a snowglobe. Utterly wonderful, magic as it all is. (Waving my little flag now and saying goooo Kari) Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh. . . the weather outside is frightful, but the fire is so delightful and since we've no place to go, Let it snow Let it snow Let it snow!! Anyone care to join me?? Great poem my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Kit...at least it [my mind]was working...LOL...I'm glad you like the way it ticks...thank you... NAN...she is utterly delicious...I adore her! I don't know what site you visit for your graphics, but keep it for these very special moments...thank you for gracing this with her presence, and with yours!... Marsha...you mean you DON'T live in a snowglobe? You sure? I mean after all, you've got MY address...and you seem QUITE comfortable here...LOL...thank you!... HUGS Marge {~,^} Quite a voice you've got there Sven! I believe you've led everyone in the sing-a-long...thank you!... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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The poem is really beautiful and I hope to God Toerag and LongJohn have already gone to bed! I would love to shake your world, sunshine. Your words shake mine!! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sunshine......... I really loved this one......with all the snow around here, I feel like I'm inside a snow globe!! Great writing as you always do! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sunshine
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'Deer...Um, are you telling me something about LJA and Toe's sleeping habits...or is it the "mouse" thing...or were you just shook up?...Thanks for reading... Sunny1...aren't snowglobes wonderful? I have a beautiful one in my home with an angel inside...I love unique items, so she is very special to me as she is equisite in design...I love collecting my angels...and tea cups! What a wonderful day this is! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sunshine
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uh oh...the globe's in motion...IT'S SNOWING..........WHEEEEEEEEEE |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Karilea~ This is absolutely precious! You are so imaginative and unique! Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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