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vandana
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0 posted 2000-12-19 06:38 PM


You are my angel,
You are my life,
You are my dream,
Dreams that come true,
You are my life,
You are my love,
You are my everything,
I need,
Lord has answered
my dreams,
Since,
you came into my life,
you make me smile,
When you touch me,
Now I know,
you have become my life,
You're my life,
Yes,
Now you're my life
And I love you deeply...
You are my life...

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-12-19 06:56 PM


oops,sorry for the double post  

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SEA
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2 posted 2000-12-19 06:57 PM


This is terrific!!   -SEA
Aimster
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3 posted 2000-12-19 07:22 PM


Vandana~
beautiful poem full of loving
reflections of your heart. really
enjoyed this a lot!
take care.
~amy~

~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


Sven
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4 posted 2000-12-19 07:30 PM


vandana my friend. . . you just keep getting better and better. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-12-19 08:03 PM


vandana,

This is wonderful writing.  Reminds me of a song by a group called Frozen Ghost "Dream Come True".  I think you'd enjoy it.  Nice work.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2000-12-19 08:14 PM


Vandana,
it's always such a pleasure to read your words and thoughts!! This one is truly lovely, and made me happy....thank you!!  


Write on!
-<--<--{(@


dgvarner
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7 posted 2000-12-19 10:22 PM


van..this reads like a song..  

someone is definately very special to you!  

nice work  

hugs, g

"the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'"
-unknown

vandana
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8 posted 2000-12-20 12:27 PM


Thank you all for your replies
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9 posted 2000-12-20 12:52 PM


Wonderful write and so full of that consuming power of love.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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vandana
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10 posted 2000-12-20 05:09 PM


Thank you,Mark!!!!
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2000-12-20 05:14 PM


"You make me smile."  I am so happy to know that vandana is smiling...James
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