Open Poetry #11 |
You Are My Life!! |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
You are my angel, You are my life, You are my dream, Dreams that come true, You are my life, You are my love, You are my everything, I need, Lord has answered my dreams, Since, you came into my life, you make me smile, When you touch me, Now I know, you have become my life, You're my life, Yes, Now you're my life And I love you deeply... You are my life... |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oops,sorry for the double post [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is terrific!! -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Vandana~ beautiful poem full of loving reflections of your heart. really enjoyed this a lot! take care. ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana my friend. . . you just keep getting better and better. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, This is wonderful writing. Reminds me of a song by a group called Frozen Ghost "Dream Come True". I think you'd enjoy it. Nice work. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Vandana, it's always such a pleasure to read your words and thoughts!! This one is truly lovely, and made me happy....thank you!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
van..this reads like a song.. someone is definately very special to you! nice work hugs, g "the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'" -unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all for your replies |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful write and so full of that consuming power of love. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,Mark!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"You make me smile." I am so happy to know that vandana is smiling...James |
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