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A Heart and Smile
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A Heart and Smile |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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A Heart and Smile ~~~ He's lonesome since you walked the mile beyond the moor and laurel Your parting took his heart and smile He stands with no tomorrow ~ His eyes are cast in dullest grey and each does but remind me Of grueling hours passed away in sorrows sights we can't see ~ Perhaps he just relives that night as stars shawn bright above you and gently cast entrancing light on vows you both have kept true ~ On Heaven's step you wait in kind with loved ones there beside you Till angels bring him home to find the heart and smile you cling to ~~~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Whisper soft words that tug gently at the heart strings... beautiful... -Tier |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou for the kind words Tiersdin  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such gentle love. Beautiful read. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/StartimesPoetry.html |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rex~ this touches the heart so beautifully......I loved this -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ So lovely are your thoughts ... and I'm sure she does wait for him - A prayer vigil I keep for your family. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Rex, This is trully beautiful, very much enjoyed, and I will keep you and your family in my prayers. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such tender and gentle words ... just lovely Rex. Your family is in my thoughts and prayers. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Your words prove that you are a loving son. I know your mother is smiling down knowing you will take care of your father. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do not think parents who lose children feel the most pain...I believe whenever there is great love between parent and child, the loss of a parent is truly as great...I know...and I send you my hope that soon you will only recall the good times in the ache of recollection... and she will want to see you smile again, and soon.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Rex~ So very tenderly written, soft words of heartfelt pain. I'm so sorry for your loss floating winged ~HUGS~ your way my sweet friend Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We are here for you Rex...you and your family are in my thoughts and prayers... |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Startime ... thankyou very much ~~~ SEA ... and your reply touches my heart ... thankyou ~~~ I'm sure you're right Marge ... thankyou for your prayers ... you are one in a million ~~~ Thankyou Cerenity ... you're very kind ~~~ Thankyou Kit ... you're a good friend ... appreciate your prayers ~~~ inot2B ... thankyou ... she can rest assured that we'll take good care of him ~~~ Karilea ... thankyou ... your thoughts on the matter are pretty much true ... years ago I lost a brother and mom stood tall and said that she must now carry on and care for the living. She was a beacon for sure. ~~~ Thankyou Tracie ... you're such a wonderful person ... a true friend to all ~~~ Thankyou Paula ... God bless you and all of Passions ... I thankyou all for letting me vent my emotions in these poems ... it really helps to mend the soul Merry Christmas to all |
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