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Scattered Pieces |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Scattered Pieces" Everyday that we are apart I become weaker Losing this battle How much longer can I hold out Our memories are becoming Sadly just that With every ounce of strength I have left I hold on Rising to meet the next day Quiet comfort I seek Want to find your arms Wrapped securely around me Tears fall slowly down my face As I scream out in pain Wondering do you feel it Do you feel it baby Do you feel the love That I reserve only for you This precious bond bloomed From the beautiful flower of friendship I promise you From the bottom of my heart I will love you Till death do us part When you feel lonely Like your whole world is all wrong Listen to the wind carefully And you will hear my words of love Look up in the sky There will be a rainbow just for you And at night when the stars shine Know that I'm always loving you But right now I need some time We have much to think about The next step is huge So please allow me this time I will come back to you I promise you with all that I am Will love you Till the end of time ~amy m. kennedy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy~ this is perfectly sweet!  -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it!!!!!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, firstly this is a wonderful and awesome piece from you, really pure and loving. I can read your heart in this. If I can give you just a little advice, write a list, I know it sounds silly. But do it, and on the list write what you have recieved from your love, and what it has cost you. If and I know it will, if I say the list of what your love has given to you is so much longer than what it has cost you, then do it. My Mam, always used to say, and it is totally true, don't look back and say if only I'd. She said that you will always regret the things you didn't do. And you can never tell those you love too often how much they mean to you. (There was never anything either shy or reserved about any of my family love  ) Take care love and remember I can always find time for friends, so if you need me, you know I'll be there. Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You're so strong Amy dear and so patient. Just hang in there hon. Loved the way you scattered the stanza's Hugs Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
What Marsha said!! Amy, you know what I'm going to say. . . follow your heart. . . Great poem my friend. . . loved the form, the words. . . everything. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I loved these line....listen to the wind carefully and you'll hear my words of love.....and this precious bond bloomed, from the beautiful flower of friendship....those two couplets were outstanding...great write! Nathan |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Rising to meet the next day Quiet comfort I seek Want to find your arms Wrapped securely around me Tears fall slowly down my face As I scream out in pain Wondering do you feel it Do you feel it baby' Beautiful, Aim. Fantastic write expressing your heart in the way that only you can! Love this, m'friend!! -e ~~~~~~~ ô¿ô I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Amy my friend, there is no need to rush I am sure especially when the last chapter is wrapped in a binding as strong and beautiful as your love. Superb read my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thanks to all who responded to this. You all are so wonderful and mean very much to me. I'm not sure where I should post this at...but I did want to let you all know that I am leaving Passions. I will return at some point, a month or so from now. Not sure exactly when. I have some things in my life that I desperately need to get straightened. If anyone has any questions further feel free to email me. You all are like family. Just know that I am doing okay but that I need some time away. I am sure you all can relate to that. Take care of yourselves please. Love, Amy ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
We will be right here awaiting your return my friend and you take all the time you need. Some things in life need a little time to settle in. Have a wonderful Holiday and please know that I for one wish you all the answers that you seek. Now you take care of you. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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