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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Enigma Emotions and oceans, entwine To lullaby a golden fleece With time and mind the concubine Making the cradle sway caprice. Death strikes like a stone on a pond Trough and cave and stipple and wave Circling out in ripple respond Into infinity the grave. Stars above in harbinger sit And ring it like an opiate. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lot of rippling in this one...soft, liquid ripples...a force happening through silence... long may your pen wave.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Circling out in ripple respond Into infinity the grave." Seymour, I love this. A Wonderous peice. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Stars above in harbinger sit And ring it like an opiate. Loved this, a beautiful piece. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is wonderful  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With time and mind the concubine Making the cradle sway caprice. ============ Trough and cave and stipple and wave Into infinity the grave. Stars above in harbinger sit And ring it like an opiate. =============== ahh I do so enjoy watching you flex those vocabulary muscles of yours  very cool verse of poetic pondering excellent verbiage in rhyme later-cool enigma-gator *WW* Slinky-Stinky *L* me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
With time and mind the concubine Making the cradle sway caprice. - Wow. Awesome line, and awesome poem, my friend! Corinne |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Stars above in harbinger sit And ring it like an opiate. ooh I love this excellent Seymour!! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Thank you *L* Poeminister, Thanks for the wonderful. Brian, Thanks for the beautiful. Sea, Thanks for the wonderful. JM, Poetic pondering is fun. Winkiewinkie Stinky Carinne, Thanks for the awesome. DarkAngel, Thanks for the excellent. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful combination of wording Seymour ... and the flow is superb. Excellent! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
all the superlatives were taken I think so I will just agree with all comments above..I enjoyed it... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I wish I could write like this - Corinne said awesome - insufficient word in my opinion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, Beautiful comp, thank you. Nakdthoughts, Superlatives speaks loads, thank you. Wilfred, I read your things all the time, you do pretty good. |
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