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The Night Finds Me Again
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The Night Finds Me Again |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
So, the night finds me again Sleep deprives me of what I might gain Walking along that dark desert highway Night after night and yet so far away The starless moonless night laughing Endlessly at my current plight My sanity, many are questioning I laugh endlessly with delight How do I even begin to explain All that has happened is so arcane My heart is still intact Despite the way I did react How do I get you to see That without you I have nothing Like a forest without a tree Dragon flight without a wing That fall I do remember Threatening to self-ignite Of that fire all but an ember Into that fire, ever so bright Pain has finally taken its toll I have lost that control No matter what can I do All I want is to get back to you To that place beyond all comprehension Where our hearts were formed as one To you I dare not mention I wish I could do what needs to be undone I want to learn to fly again My heart to soar back into your domain To find that ulimate peace To return to that release So, the night finds me again Sleep deprives me of what I might gain Walking along that dark desert highway Night after night and yet so far away Man that was tough. To pull through all my baggage to beat this writer's block. But after seven months I have done it. I look forward to posting and writing more poetry. The White Wolf |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
White Wolf, Wonderful images. I am happy to see your beat that block. Welcome back to the pack!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
White Wolf, This was a thoroughly enjoyable read! nice flow, images, and full of emotion... great peice to return on... *smiles* -Tier |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Lone Wolf- Thank you and I am glad to be back apart of this pack. Tiersdin- I am glad you like it. Thank you. I didn't think it was all that great but thank you all the same. I just had to post it. It is my first piece in seven months.. The White Wolf |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Such sad feelings I had as I read this..It's one of those "been there, done that" things.. Seems most of us have them..Hope your sadness passes soon..This was a great expression of how you feel..I liked it much..~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I believe your muse has broken through the barrier. Welcome to Passions! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteWolf~ Congrats on breaking free ... This line is a stunner - 'I wish I could do what needs to be undone' Very well stated. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
I know the feling White Wolf I go through these blocks quite often. Glad you broke yours. I know this feeling well. Well written. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good to see you, I told Lone Wolf she wasn't alone, this proves it!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Worth the wait I think. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Lady Lightning- Thank you. I wrote this from feelings from my past. I just needed something to inspire me. Thanx again. Sunshine- Thank you. I have been been here for a while but thank you all the same. Marge Tindal- Thank you too. I am glad you like it and that line. It was a moment of inspiration. John R- I think we have all been there a time or two. Thank you for responding. Irish Rose- I am glad Lone Wolf is no longer alone as am I glad that I am no longer alone. Thank you. EagleOne- I can see that it was a good one to come back with. I am just happy to write again. Thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening White Wolf, Welcome back to this most friendly place. And I look forward to reading more of your writings. BC |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Bill Charles- Thank you for the welcome. The White Wolf |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
This is just utterly beautiful... thank you very much for sharing. --Cassandra |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Cassandra- Thank you for the praise. It was a pleasant surprise to find out how well people liked it. So the pleasure is all mine. The White Wolf |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed the read!!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Pain has finally taken it's toll. I have lost that control." Enjoyed the emotions within this poem..James |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
vandana- I am glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you. jmlee12345- I tend to write with a lot of emotion. I am glad you liked it. Thank you. The White Wolf |
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