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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~YOU~ Ever since the dawning of time poets, composers and great scholars have said that no perfect beauty exists on earth, but, then again, they've never known you with their heart *By Melissa Honeybee* The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* said with perfection and beauty. Wonderful. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful Melissa, and in so few words. jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
but we do. . .  wonderful Melissa. . . just wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wonderful words! As you have said, the heart is certainly the place to look, well done!  "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
melissa~ this is so beautiful and full of that loving heart of yours! such a lovely write. made me smile. thanks. take care. ~amy~ |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Beautiful, short, sweet words... ~LL~ < !signature--> The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown [This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Melissa, it is wonderful to read your words again, beautiful poem, loved it. < !signature-->"In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" ian curtis [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a shining example of more in less words in its finest |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, I agree with Kaile...great piece! Nathan |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
"YOU" sure know how to write a novel with just a few words don't you? This one was wonderful my friend. So nice to see you posting with us again. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Manda_1982 Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 24Washington State,USA |
My God, perfectly put. Feeling radiates from it, just, absolutely perfect. Wonderful Job! ~Manda~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Melissa you've said so much with so few words dear lass...the words you've used are simlpy provacative!....ethome |
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