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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Stretched Garland Lancelot © 2000 Stretched garland With its fragrance Stretched garland With its beauty Stretched garland With its colors Stretched garland With its berries Stretched garland With its red bows Stretched garland Leaves fell off Stretched garland Flowers withered Stretched garland Smell was lost Stretched garland It broke in middle Stretched garland We pulled hard! Stretched garland We pulled rough! Stretched garland We didn't feel Stretched garland When in garbage! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Y'know? I think I do understand. And believe me, it mystifies me too... I liked this much, Bilal...much to ponder here! And the imagery of the garland? Superb. |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx serenity. I appreciate your encouragement. Bilal |
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