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| Open Poetry #11 |
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You Could Have Had Me......... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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You could have had me for a smile........ your personality charm and style You could have had me for a walk because you listen when I talk You could have had me for a dance I'm such a sucker for romance You could have had me for words spoken true all I needed to hear was I love you ~SEA~ * just an old ache visiting me tonight *  |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
A little romance goes a long way doesn't it SEA. As always your poems are right to the point and expressed so well. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
SEA... Wow, this one`s really great...It`s a shame the 3 magic words never came...But they will I know. When you least expect it. here`s a little flower to thank you ----<-@ -Ramses- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now that is one man that made the mistake of his lifetime. So painful to know that you were so willing yet that the love you held was not seen and returned by the one that you directed it to. Nice to know that you found the one that makes you so happy these days my friend because you look so damn good in love and you wear it with grace and ellegance in your words. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Oh wow.. beautiful. All these writes are making my heart ache for Craig (My boyfriend). *sigh* A very talented one you are SEA. I'll go hug my pillow and cry now. Happy Holidays to you and yours.  --Cassandra |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
John~ Romance is the key, I think thanksRamses~ it's ok I guess, I have a love that is true now Mark~ I wish you could have told him that about 9 years ago......oh well......yea, my hubby is the best thank you for your praise......you know I eat it up  Cassandra~ sorry you are missing your man.....hope you have sweet dreams thank you -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
How sweet your words are..an aching yes, but you ache beautifully.. And I know I don't have to tell you I'm putting this one away for later... I liked.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
~hug~ SEA sweet pea your ache was felt Floating lotsa winged ~HUGS~ your way Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You write for all of us in love with romance and romancing love. And you do it so very well Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea I suppose all these thoughts only work when romancing sweet one's like you...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just letting him know that he could have had you but he was just lacking in some areas fo romance...if there is anyone out there that this is directed to I think he NEEDS to read it because he's gonna crash and burn everywhere he goes......take care....ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Sea......love it.....and I could see, why he could have you.....you are one loving piece.....enjoyed reading this lovely piece. I can't come in the next few days...so I want to wish you   have wonderful loving holliday's my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA~ you have shared your heart so beautifully....ohhhh how these words ring true for me.....thanks for this..... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I was drawn by the title, because I've been there, and you wrote exactly what I felt. Glad you found someone who appreciates you. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
Romance can hurt sometimes, believe me. The pain will go away sometime though, you just have to wait for it to pass. --Lil' Girl |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
those old aches'll getcha sometimes aye SEA... but i think the ache just came in to drop off a wonderful little ditty for you to share with us hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sweetie, I am so very glad you have love in your life. It makes all the difference in the world. Much love and hugs to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/StartimesPoetry.html |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Somehow we never quite forget that first real, true love, the one that touched our heart the most even others have loved us, even when we know this truest love is not meant to be... somehow we just never forget... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LL~ so very sweet.......thank you!!  Tracie~ love your hugs thanks!  Interloper~ so do you my friend James~ thank you, you are the sweet one!Ethome~ back then, he knew, believe me, it was no secret......thank you for the crash and burn.....he's happily married now.....and so am I Charisma~ thank you sweetie, I will mis you...have a beautiful Chrismas!! Greeneyes~ thank you!! Kcsgrandma~glad I could touch you......yes, I do have someone wonderful now! thanks Lil' girl~ it comes and goes, but mostly resides in memories........thank you DG~ you know they do.... thank you so much Startime~ yes it does......I'm very grateful for my husbands love Thanks -SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ no, we never do forget it do we? We should learn from it and keep it safe in our memories thanks -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, Oh I know those if only's and but's This is such a brilliant write from you love it really is. Uttertly wonderful, it really is. And I'm so happy for you that you found the happiness that you deserve. Take care kid Mushy Merry Christmas have a good one Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
gee if I had only known. LOl I loved it dear friend. Very good writing. Love and light, Richard |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Of all the phrases in the English language....the if only's are the worst; aren't they? Lovely write...as always...keeping this one for my library Hugs, PepPepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Very good SEA....... Robert |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thank you Marsha Richard.......I tried to tell ya.... thanksPepper, you are awesome..... thanksRobertB...... thank you-SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, Well in my opinion it is their loss not yours!! You are a wonderful, kind, caring, person my friend. You will find someone even better . . . I just know it!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
SEA, I am so there with you on this one. It is DEFINITELY his loss, which I am learning as well. Great write!! Gotta keep this one! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Old aches, memories, past things, whatever one calls them they hold a special place in the heart, as the beauty in this well shows. Thanks for sharing your heart... jwesley |
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