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John R
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since 2000-12-14
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Toledo OH

0 posted 2000-12-19 03:20 AM



What You Do To Me

My heart tells me what to say
and my hands tremble
as I write the words.
My eyes remember
and my heart longs
for your sight.
My lips part
and they thirst
for the taste of yours.
My mind wanders,
but always
to thoughts of you.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


© Copyright 2000 John Romstadt - All Rights Reserved
Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
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1 posted 2000-12-19 03:31 AM


Ohhh..This is gooood..I remember having these same kind of thoughts a time or two myself...    I liked this much...    ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Cassandra
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since 2000-12-16
Posts 48
Charlotte, North Carolina, USA
2 posted 2000-12-19 06:17 AM


So much love and passion. So lovingly sweet and emotional... great read.


--Cassandra

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-12-19 07:10 AM


JohnR~
You know - it's a Federal offense to read someone else's mail ! !  
I hope you look good in chains !
LOL !
Yep, I think this one resembles me.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kaile
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4 posted 2000-12-19 08:00 AM


simple, short and sweet...your ending just left me with a sigh...thanx for the read
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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5 posted 2000-12-19 08:05 AM


John once you're hooked your hooked and you can't keep your thoughts away from the vision of that lady   I think you did a great job expressing it here...ethome
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2000-12-19 09:34 PM


John the simplicity of your words touch me...each of your poems say so much and so freely...I love them all   take care

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

7 posted 2000-12-19 09:39 PM



JOHN, this is indeed one of my favorites...
I'll be keeping this one in library for many more reads...
Thank you for sharing such an exquisite write...

coco

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