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John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

0 posted 2000-12-19 03:20 AM

What You Do To Me

My heart tells me what to say
and my hands tremble
as I write the words.
My eyes remember
and my heart longs
for your sight.
My lips part
and they thirst
for the taste of yours.
My mind wanders,
but always
to thoughts of you.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

1 posted 2000-12-19 03:31 AM

Ohhh..This is gooood..I remember having these same kind of thoughts a time or two myself...

I liked this much...

~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Cassandra
Junior Member

since 2000-12-16

Posts 48
Charlotte, North Carolina, USA

2 posted 2000-12-19 06:17 AM

So much love and passion. So lovingly sweet and emotional... great read.

--Cassandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-12-19 07:10 AM

JohnR~
You know - it's a Federal offense to read someone else's mail ! !
I hope you look good in chains !
LOL !
Yep, I think this one resembles me.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-12-19 08:00 AM

simple, short and sweet...your ending just left me with a sigh...thanx for the read

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2000-12-19 08:05 AM

John once you're hooked your hooked and you can't keep your thoughts away from the vision of that lady I think you did a great job expressing it here...ethome

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2000-12-19 09:34 PM

John the simplicity of your words touch me...each of your poems say so much and so freely...I love them all

take care

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

7 posted 2000-12-19 09:39 PM

JOHN, this is indeed one of my favorites...
I'll be keeping this one in library for many more reads...
Thank you for sharing such an exquisite write...

coco

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