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My Heart Fell In Love Too Easily
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My Heart Fell In Love Too Easily |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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My Heart Fell In Love Too Easily My heart fell in love far too easily, she fell so terribly hard Oh why could I not have told her falling in love was barred? You didn't have to beckon her, she didn't hear any love call She didn't need any urging, she didn't need capturing at all Right from the first instant, from that single moment in time She'd waved her flag of surrender she'd given in to loves sign My soul walked over to your side before the battle was fought Oh why doesn't she realise what painful lessons she'll be taught She doesn't know what she's doing she thinks only of your touch I wish she'd listen to me but she wants your love far too much I don't want to hurt her so, she's as fragile as she can possibly be She doesn't want to hear of heartache, she thinks that love is free My love is sitting in the enemy camp discussing tactics of war Oh why doesn't she realise that soon she'll be the one who's sore She doesn't think she's a traitor, she thinks she's talking peace How I want for all this to end, this continued conflict to cease I don't know how long I can resist against your conquering heart With all my feelings against me, my will seems to fall totally apart My senses have all deserted they're watching me lose this fight They're awaiting the finale before they all decamp in sheer delight I've tried to rally all my defenses but they have all crumbled away There's nothing left to fight with and I know I've lost it anyway I'm surrendering and my treacherous feelings will return again to me With love, soul and heart, to guide me I'll know your loves beauty Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I really liked this one. We have to take the chance with our hearts. If we dont then we might as well give up and lay down. Love and light, Richard |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~  dear heart, this is perfect!!"She doesn't want to hear of heartache, she thinks that love is free" I loved this....... -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"My love is sitting in the enemy camp discussing tactics of war..." I know, I know...I don't listen to me, either...smiles and hugs. Keep 'em coming. (That's MY motto...lol) Enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I've often called my heart in to have a cuppa with my mind...they often end up arguing, then not only has there been heartache, but a headache as well... Marsha, I am enjoying the grow of you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh how I know this feelings.....you describe them very well.....to know and to feel things are so different, let your heart guide you...and I love the metaphors... well done Marsha ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard, thank you love, it's true, we have to take a chance always. I do however seen to hear the words will you wait a minute about five minutes too late. I call it impetuousity, everyone calls it foolish.  Take care Mushy Marsha Circe, thank you sweetie, it was being lectured but the five wicked sisters, about my habit of not looking before I leap. I think they were paying me back for the dress. Never mind, the looks on their faces was worth the lecture. Take care kid Mushy Serenity, isn't it always the way, in fact not only does my heart not listen to my head, it's like it's talking a foriegn language. Oh well c'est la vie. Thank you love glad you liked it.Take care Mushy Kari love, my head and my heart aren't even on speaking terms, it's a shame because I'm sure there's some good advice there. Still no one said life was easy did they? Am I then love, you really think so, it's not you being kind is it? (Yes I know very likely, you are too sweet to me. )Take care Majestic Marsha Charisma, thank you so much love I do really appreciate it. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
I really , really liked this..I have to say I agree with Sunshine..I'm always having fights with my head and my heart..lol.. Thanks for another keeper Marsha... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
LL, I'm sorry love, I forgot about this one. Head like a sieve me. well it's either that or I'm a little distracted. Thank you very much love I do appreciate you I really do. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha~ are you reading my mind or something excellent piece here...you have laid all your feelings on the line and quite beautifully i might add. take care loves ya, amy ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, it does feel like that doesn't it, I know. But I remember what I told you and keep my eyes fixed on the goal. Even if it does feel as if it's an unreachable dream. It's not, it's there. take care of yourself sweetie Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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