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Response to Interloper's Winter...........
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Response to Interloper's Winter........... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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sleep comes, rustling branch shivers in the frigid night sap stays at the foot life breaths in quiet soul of tree stays hidden now waiting for the warm black, white, gray night comes harboring promises of life's love of life's song Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Love this The haiku form works well in this triplet. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Good day, I love all three of these. Beautifully done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
John R, thank you...I find it comforting to write them in this manner...glad you don't mind... Poeminister, your kind words leave me smiling, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ these are perfect.......love the mental pictures they create  -SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sunshine, these are soft and gentle and reflect a pure heart. be well Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, these are truly beautiful, they really are. Absolutely astoudingly wonderful Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Kari....this is so true....love these lines. well I can't come in very often these week, so I will wish you  wishing you and yours some wonderful days Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sunshine I love that nature angle you've been writing from lately and this is no different..some real beautiful thoughts contained in these few lines.....ethome |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a wonderful way to start my day Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, so glad you could see the tree for the forest... Kethry...pure?...perhaps....thank you... Marsha, probably the most abbreviated message I've ever seen...and all the care is there...thank you!... Charisma, Merry Christmas!... Ethome, so glad we share a common thread...thank you... Interloper...you're quite welcome!... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - These visions of the frigid winter bring forth my own dreams of tranquility and peace - may I respond in kind? heh heh - as if she could say, "NO" you devil, Long John Thank you, Karilea |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Again, I say, there should be a name for writing Haiku in this manner. . . in this style. . . 9 lines, alternating 5-7-5 in 3 stanzas. . . Anyone??? Beautiful from you as always my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, you're so right it was the most abreviated message I've ever sent to you. I was in the middle of another storm in a teacup. It seems everyone needs a break I think, and I shall be ver greatful when Friday comes and all those people who aren't working over the hols go home. Talk about peace and goodwill it seems in very short supply at the moment. Now how beautiful these are love, you really do have the perfect poetic pen. I really do adore these.Take care love Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
sigh...some people never learn...lumps of coal for you, LJA!!!... Sven, I agree...name that style!.... Marsha, 'twould seem my pen attracts rats in the form of pirates...but I adore your words regardless....hugs, Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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