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I'll Take That Kiss
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I'll Take That Kiss |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'll Take That Kiss So I'll admit a certain part of life consists of loneliness while spreading the notion that at times Love flows like an ocean. And yes I enjoy the feeling of a women in my arms especially when she holds onto me with the same intensity she receives. It is such a pleasure to feel a woman's softness. Her tender valleys and silky curves, the protuding mounds and textured furs. Was on a warm and pleasant evening I discovered her lips. Warm and tender silky lips that were begging for a kiss. Lips are not all the same you know. Some are tasty and some are just for show. Some say "yes" and some say "no". Still when you have found those lips fashioned and formed just for you somehow within the power of a kiss you will surely know that a kiss from those very lips can drive you nutty. Believe me, when I say "This is true". I have found lips such as these. The finest lips ever given to me. And through those lips she beckons me to "come and get your kiss." And I'm not talking about a little peck. Her kiss can be soft and slow or fast and hard. Her kiss can be sensual or rough. She doesn't finish kissing me til I've had enough. She kisses me like I'm somebody. She kisses me with every ounce of strength within her body. And I take that kiss and I want it so bad and I give it back with every ounce of desire that I have. I Love that kiss everyday I wait for it to have it's way. And I miss her kiss when she's away. "Oh honey, how I miss your kiss." Jameslee@November20,2000 YourkissyourkissiswhatImiss whenIturnoutthelights. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
James those things you write about are so true...beautiful hugs and kisses from someone you share intimate feelings with starts at the very essence of love and grows to envelope you completely...This is a great honest poem, well written and sincere.... loved it!! ethome |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Oh James......my the temperature is rising here! I enjoyed the read bello! mmm a kiss indeed!  Roniece |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a kiss is a wonderous thing isnt it..enjoyed reading your lovely words james.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
James- this is full of your heart my friend! beautiful, simply beautiful. a kiss can be all these things and more. thanks for the sweet reminder. take care. ~amy~ |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Is it just me, or does this poem makes one wish to be kissed.. like now? *smiles* loved this! -Tier |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, what can I say?? You know that I loved it. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"because your kiss, your kiss is on my lips, because your kiss, your kiss, I can't resist, because your kiss is what I miss when I turn out the light..." I have always loved that song and I have ALWAYS loved that activity!  This is a wonderful ode to kisses....good job! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you all so very much for the wonderful responses and yes I will take that kiss every opportunity I have...I long for that kiss...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I should take that kiss either... Charisma |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ Come here baby, I got some serious lips for kissing........*SMOOCH*  Loved this, it's so sensuous. -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-20-2000).] |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
James, hello. You've given delectable details in this sweet piece of writing. Who doesn't love (or need) the thrill of a kiss, whether delicate and tender or fiercely passionate? It's all exquisite. Nice (warm) reading, James. Thank you ~ Rainy |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Nothing better then a great kiss!! :0 Fantastic James! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Nothing better then a great kiss!! Fantastic James! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh James...kiss after kiss after kiss...just for you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Charisma, Sea, Rainydays, Marina and Paula for the nice comments...I'm going to save those kisses for a rainy day...James |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Aloha, A wonderful poem of full description and whelm of a kiss. It moved me real well..  ...mmmm good! Paradise does that to you. hehehe. I love your style as well.I look forward to more  Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
A kiss is just a kiss, til it comes from the lips of one who holds your heart. Very lucky lady!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Koko and inot...I appreciate your nice responses...James |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Woo Hoo, so wasn't what I was expecting but I certainly won't complain... No Sir Re Bob That was cool James!Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
James very sensuous, so true indeed, a kiss is the avenue to the heart, mind and soul, the key to beginnings and delightful endings, The shear taste of honey awaiting on the lips. A kiss tells how you feel. A kiss is so many words that sometimes it's hard to explain. Great poem. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Nothing better than kisses...especially one's that make you feel em'..Knock your socks off kisses..Umm..Umm... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Saunni, Rosebud and Lady for the lovely responses...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* okay, now I am filled with the desire to feel such a kiss. One that will flame my whole body.*sigh* I loved this poem. Much love to you from me Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
They say that you can read so much into a kiss. I believe this to be true. Sounds like you have a kiss that's made just for you! You've describe a perfect kiss so well...enjoyed. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
loved the read. This work has so much truth in it. Richard |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I appreciate it Startime, Sheri and Richard. This is a poem about the worlds best kisser and its not me...it is her...I am always pleased to share her kiss...James |
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