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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-11-19 05:15 AM


I'll Take That Kiss

So I'll admit a certain part of life consists of loneliness
while spreading the notion that at times Love flows like an ocean.
And yes I enjoy the feeling of a women in my arms
especially when she holds onto me with the same intensity she receives.
It is such a pleasure to feel a woman's softness.
Her tender valleys and silky curves,
the protuding mounds and textured furs.
Was on a warm and pleasant evening I discovered her lips.
Warm and tender silky lips that were begging for a kiss.
Lips are not all the same you know.
Some are tasty and some are just for show.
Some say "yes" and some say "no".
Still when you have found those lips fashioned and formed just for you
somehow within the power of a kiss you will surely know
that a kiss from those very lips can drive you nutty.
Believe me, when I say "This is true".
I have found lips such as these.
The finest lips ever given to me.
And through those lips she beckons me
to "come and get your kiss."
And I'm not talking about a little peck.
Her kiss can be soft and slow or fast and hard.
Her kiss can be sensual or rough.
She doesn't finish kissing me til I've had enough.
She kisses me like I'm somebody.
She kisses me with every ounce of strength within her body.
And I take that kiss and I want it so bad
and I give it back with every ounce of desire that I have.
I Love that kiss everyday
I wait for it to have it's way.
And I miss her kiss when she's away.
"Oh honey, how I miss your kiss."

Jameslee@November20,2000
YourkissyourkissiswhatImiss
whenIturnoutthelights.

© Copyright 2000 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2000-11-19 05:20 AM


James those things you write about are so true...beautiful hugs and kisses from someone you share intimate feelings with starts at the very essence of love and grows to envelope you completely...This is a great honest poem, well written and sincere.... loved it!! ethome
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2000-11-19 05:21 AM


Oh James......my the temperature is rising here!  I enjoyed the read bello!  mmm a kiss indeed!   Roniece  
Victoria
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3 posted 2000-11-19 09:32 AM


a kiss is a wonderous thing isnt it..enjoyed reading your lovely words james..

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-11-19 11:35 AM


James-
this is full of your heart my friend!
beautiful, simply beautiful. a kiss can
be all these things and more. thanks for
the sweet reminder. take care.
~amy~

Tiersdin
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5 posted 2000-11-19 11:42 AM


Is it just me, or does this poem makes one wish to be kissed.. like now?  

*smiles*

loved this!

-Tier

Sven
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6 posted 2000-11-19 02:21 PM


James, what can I say??  You know that I loved it. . .  

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Beki
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Newport Beach, CA, USA
7 posted 2000-11-19 02:39 PM


"because your kiss, your kiss is on my lips,
because your kiss, your kiss, I can't resist,
because your kiss is what I miss
when I turn out the light..."

I have always loved that song and I have ALWAYS loved that activity!    This is a wonderful ode to kisses....good job!

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2000-11-20 02:24 PM


Thank you all so very much for the wonderful responses and yes I will take that kiss every opportunity I have...I long for that kiss...James
Charisma
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9 posted 2000-11-20 03:52 PM


I should take that kiss either...



Charisma

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10 posted 2000-11-20 04:00 PM


James~ Come here baby, I got some serious lips for kissing........*SMOOCH*   Loved this, it's so sensuous.   -SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-20-2000).]

Rainydays
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11 posted 2000-11-20 04:12 PM


James, hello. You've given delectable details in this sweet piece of writing. Who doesn't love (or need) the thrill of a kiss, whether delicate and tender or fiercely passionate? It's all exquisite.  Nice (warm) reading, James. Thank you ~

Rainy    

Marina
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12 posted 2000-11-21 01:24 AM


Nothing better then a great kiss!!  :0

Fantastic James!

Marina


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Marina
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13 posted 2000-11-21 01:25 AM


Nothing better then a great kiss!!  

Fantastic James!

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Paula Finn
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14 posted 2000-11-21 01:43 AM


Oh James...kiss after kiss after kiss...just for you
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2000-11-22 02:21 PM


Thank you Charisma, Sea, Rainydays, Marina and Paula for the nice comments...I'm going to save those kisses for a rainy day...James
KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii
16 posted 2000-12-04 03:30 PM


Aloha, A wonderful poem of full description and whelm of a kiss. It moved me real well.. ...mmmm  good! Paradise does that to you. hehehe. I love your style as well.
I look forward to more  

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



inot2B
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17 posted 2000-12-04 04:09 PM


A kiss is just a kiss, til it comes from the lips of one who holds your heart. Very lucky lady!!
JamesMichael
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18 posted 2000-12-06 10:01 PM


Thank you Koko and inot...I appreciate your nice responses...James
Saunni
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19 posted 2000-12-06 11:16 PM


Woo Hoo, so wasn't what I was expecting but I certainly won't complain... No Sir Re Bob   That was cool James!

Sauni


Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Rosebud1229
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20 posted 2000-12-06 11:22 PM


James very sensuous, so true indeed, a kiss is the avenue to the heart, mind and soul, the key to beginnings and delightful endings, The shear taste of honey awaiting on the lips.  A kiss tells how you feel. A kiss is so many words that sometimes it's hard to explain. Great poem.
Lady Lightning
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21 posted 2000-12-07 09:24 PM


Nothing better than kisses...especially one's that make you feel em'..Knock your socks off kisses..Umm..Umm.....Loved it..~LL~
JamesMichael
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22 posted 2000-12-09 02:45 PM


Thank you Saunni, Rosebud and Lady for the lovely responses...James
Startime
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23 posted 2000-12-09 02:56 PM


*sigh* okay, now I am filled with the desire to feel such a kiss. One that will flame my whole body.*sigh* I loved this poem. Much love to you from me

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


Irie
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24 posted 2000-12-09 02:59 PM


They say that you can read so much into a kiss.
I believe this to be true.
Sounds like you have a kiss that's made just for you!

You've describe a perfect kiss so well...enjoyed.



~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



maxtec1
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Garland, Tx
25 posted 2000-12-09 03:07 PM


loved the read. This work has so much truth in it.
Richard

JamesMichael
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26 posted 2000-12-19 04:17 PM


I appreciate it Startime, Sheri and Richard.
This is a poem about the worlds best kisser and its not me...it is her...I am always pleased to share her kiss...James

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