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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-12-18 04:02 PM

Lonely

She is soft and succulent.
She is irresistibly opposite.
She is positively radiant
of silky beauty confidence.
We take our time talking stories
and surveying personalities.
We will see where the feelings go
to determine future posiblilities.
Her face is fresh and pretty.
Her body toned and ready.
A short kiss upon her lips.
I needed just a little tenderness.
She is sexy and sensual.
She is simply beautiful.
She is lonely.
Me too.

Jameslee@December18,2000

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2000-12-18 04:12 PM

*sigh* this is so very beautifully penned. *sigh* this loneliness if a friend of mine too. I pray you and the lady you have written this for find someone tender in your live. You are sweet and so are your words. A heart like yours should not be alone. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2000-12-18 04:47 PM

James~ I want to say this is sad....but it is filled with hope.........

-SEA Great writting!!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2000-12-18 06:33 PM

you know what they say James. . . two lonelies make a together. . .

Wonderful my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

4 posted 2000-12-18 06:35 PM

Clapping very good writing. I enjoyed the read,
love and light,
Richard

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-12-18 09:13 PM

James,

Sweet one my friend. Here is hoping that neither of you are lonely much longer.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2000-12-18 09:19 PM

Evening James,

This is a very special writing. It all comes together, and I do like it. Hope that the loniness is close to being over for you.

By the way, how about posting your photo on Passions? Just a suggestion.

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-12-22 03:56 PM

Thank you Startime, Sea, Sven, Richard, LW and BC. I appreciate your comments...and Merry Christmas to all and to all a good night filled with kisses...James

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