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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-12-13 07:47 AM



Catch Me Smiling
~*Marge Tindal*~

Once more with laughter
caress my face with your smile
Live the dreams of the night
we've shared for such a long, long while

Hold me when the gentle dawn
comes up across the lake
Take my hand and walk with me
more laughter we will make

Do it once again
just the way you did today
Catch me smiling with the joy
you have brought my way

Take me to tomorrow
where we will begin
a day just like today
as gentle loving friends





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Celeste
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1 posted 2000-12-13 08:22 AM


The beauty of living!  You expressed this wonderfully.   Nice job!

To capture and live a moment is truly living



BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-12-13 08:50 AM


Marge~ friendship is special, and one who can cause the heart to smile is a true rare gift. Lovely poem.
Deb

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3 posted 2000-12-13 09:04 AM


That you did!!! I always try to start my day with one of yours marge, just for that reason...and hey...the tooth is better...it worked...will e ya later, if the server "serves" that is...love ya!
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4 posted 2000-12-13 09:07 AM


Caught ya!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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5 posted 2000-12-13 10:33 AM


oh marge you are a sparkle in passions, always know how to bring up a smile on my face.
it's a pleasure to read your fabulous work, every time again.

you are worth a smile.....and a lot more.

((hugs))
Charisma

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with you
6 posted 2000-12-13 10:45 AM


Smiling here..........loving this   -SEA
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7 posted 2000-12-13 12:30 PM


such a wonderful poem of friendship..will add my   to the pile...
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-12-13 08:28 PM


DreamKeeper~
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts.

BloomingRose~
Yes, very special, indeed.

Serenity~
Thank you for the sweet reply.
Glad it's better !

Karilea~
LOL !  That ya' did !

Charisma~
I wish I could always share a smile with a friend.
Thanks for sharing yours.

SEA~
Gotcha !  

Kaile~
A pile of smiles ...
I LIKE that thought.




~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Ariana
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9 posted 2000-12-13 08:33 PM


Marge:

"Do it once again
just the way you did today
Catch me smiling with the joy
you have brought my way"

Beautiful - I see you smiling girl!  Really enjoyed the words and tender thoughts.

                     Ariana

Kit McCallum
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10 posted 2000-12-13 08:54 PM


And what a wonderful smile it must be ... beautiful thoughts Marge, such a wonderful feeling to begin the day with a smile!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

dgvarner
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11 posted 2000-12-13 10:07 PM


laughter can do wonderful things for the soul aye..    

very nice friendship poem marge  

hugs, g

"people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s.

Paula Finn
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12 posted 2000-12-14 12:41 PM


Nice to have a friend like this...I have one like this...he is very special...thanks for reminding me
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13 posted 2000-12-14 02:24 AM



Marge, I enjoyed so much this one....

You make a smile shine bright with the words spoken from your heart....

coco

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14 posted 2000-12-14 06:45 AM


Ariana~
What a lovely name !
Thanks for grabbing a smile and for leaving one of your own !

Kit~
Mine for wearing - and for sharing~
Yours to wear this day !

DG~
Yes, and laughter it is for the day !

Paula~
Walk within the sunshine of the smile from a friend !  

Dani~
And you return the smiles brightly !

LOVE ALL THESE SMILES !  
Spread 'em around the world !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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15 posted 2000-12-14 06:59 AM


Marge, this has me smiling, it is utterly wonderful, it really is, I really love this one. Really great work from you as always.
Take care
                   Mushy Marsha

                        
                        
                      
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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16 posted 2000-12-15 06:57 AM


Another delightful piece from you. No one spreads the smiles quite like you Marge!  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.


Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2000-12-15 07:18 AM


Marsha~
Grinning with delight that you enjoyed it.  

EagleOne~
I have to give these smiles away -
so they will have a place to stay.
Glad to see you caught one !  

*Love to the world !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mark Bohannan
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18 posted 2000-12-15 12:37 PM


I think I have caught more than my share from you but that won't stop me from coming back for more.   

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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19 posted 2000-12-15 01:24 PM


BIG   here Marge...
Such fun to come in and read your work...    ~LL~



The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2000-12-15 01:38 PM


MarkB~
Never too many smiles for you, sweetheart.
Love n' hugs n' stuff !

LadyLightning~
Fun to have you here.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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21 posted 2000-12-15 07:42 PM


AMONG SOARING EAGLES EVEN KITCHI-MANITOU
IS ABLE TO CATCH THE BRILLIANCE OF THESE WORDS AND SMILES......LOVYA  MAIDEN

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22 posted 2000-12-15 09:28 PM


Marge~

I think I caught you smiling a while back my friend.     This was too cute and made ME smile.  Right back at ya sweet lady.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2000-12-17 10:19 AM


SoaringEagle~
Then may the Great Spirit (Kitchi-Manitou)
walk you among many-smiles, my friend.
I love your serenity and your inspiration.
Thank you for giving me many-smiles.

LoneWolf~
LOVE THAT SMILE !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ethome
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24 posted 2000-12-17 11:12 AM


Just as sure as the great light fills the sky you will always bring a smile to my face through the boundless energy of your vibrant and life enhancing lines of poetry...this one is no different as it bubbles out of your fountain of poetic creativeness...you always give me a little shot in the heart Marge ...makes my day flow freely....ethome
Irish Rose
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25 posted 2000-12-17 06:38 PM


Now THIS put a song in my heart. Thank you Marge.

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh



Marge Tindal
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26 posted 2000-12-22 05:53 PM


ETHome~
Thank you for such a lovely reply.
Makes a poet feel reeeeeeeeal good !

Kathleen~
Love hearing you sing !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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