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Strange thoughts from the underworld
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Strange thoughts from the underworld |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
My faults have been my own some form of penance that has found itself in my drifting heart. I’m tired, tired of it, tired of the hope I once had having been pushed aside for nothing more than a sound. I understand the slight version of hopes we all have that follow us through life and restore us occasionally. I understand that we must fail at least once or more in how we love or how we want to be loved. My failure came from the fact that my heart once lost amongst rivers of failures that I had put upon myself. These failures turned to dust my love for my self, my dreams I had thought gone only to find them buried. My failure is my own, in this, I am to cry, which in time will go and find myself stronger. So what version of me am I to find that I can still love with everything I have and more than I have known. Simple. I have been given that chance, of which I shall not fail nor will I allow myself to run. So look quick, my smile is back, my mind active, and my heart full. Funny, how fate works. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your thoughts...sometimes we need to look back...perhaps we made mistakes...perhaps we were just with the wrong person and no matter what we do the relationship will fail...James |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Hey U, I just wanted you to know that although I have not been writing I have been reading everything that you have written and you still amaze me to this day and always will.....your talent is endless Michael. It is funny how fate works indeed......funny how fate brings people together for reasons beyond our control......and seperates for reasons we can't always see at the time......but all in all our destiny's path will be followed...for as much as we wish we could sometimes, we can't change it. We love, we learn...and if we are lucky we will continue to love forever, even if destiny went a diffrent way. For it doesn't take away from that love in that time in our lives. I am glad to read you are happy.....We do after all have only one life.....and it was ment to be lived. As Always and forever will be, Jenn E |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Michael, Wonderful writing here, wow so truthful, I am one of those that wonders at times when will fate hit me square in the face so I do not repeat my mistakes, am I looking for a kind of love that just does not exist or what the heck am I doing to not be blessed like those around me, I don't know so I wait, this one is a keeper thank you so much, and I am very happy for you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
If we couldn't be retrospective periodically, we couldn't advance, or clear away the dark that sometimes encompasses us. Well written my friend. jwesley |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wow..I can realte to this..This is such good writing..Mistakes made yet we can go on..Loved it...  ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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