Open Poetry #11 |
Utrillo-Like Scene in Delaware |
Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Utrillo-Like Scene in Delaware Sky most overcast Late winter afternoon Dark approaching twilight Pavement wet and black Building colors muted Headlights reflecting Long shines of bright Star-like glow ‘round streetlamps Silhouettes with black umbrellas Cluttering the walks Homes awaiting owners To turn on their festive lights And dress their night For the season |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WY~ I loved that I could see everything.....the cold street.....the warm houses.......very well done! -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Billy you made me homesick..the Christmas's in Delaware were always the best..i was thinking today about the ice cream sandwiches i use to buy on the corner of eight and market when i was younger outside of kreseges..doubt if its there anymore..mmmm they were good ha..even in the winter time.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sea - a Most loyal reader you are - and I'm most grateful thank you Victoria- Kresge's became Woolworth's became Happy Harry's - (I think it still is ~G~ - thanks ) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful scene you set there Wilfred, could see and feel it all. Kinda wish I was there...nice cup of nog and a turkey leg sitting there watching it all. jwesley |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you with your turkey leg - I've some leftover Pizza from Grotto Pizza stil in 'frig... ~S~ - thanks |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very vivid and pretty ...great picture shot from a poet's eyes and it came out excellent, perfect color and images and all the rest...........Bill keep at'em!! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Thanks ethome - for the past two days - my views are restricted to what I can see from my window and my imagination - your responses are most appreciated. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I hope, Sir, that your Christmas lights up like the poems you bless us with...thank you for everything you share...God Bless you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love the imagery, Christmas has such a wonderful atmosphere....love your description. Charisma |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea - Charisma - The weather here has been so 'yucky' - I HAD to find something in it - but it was a stretch - Thank you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--such a lovely scene...somehow cold weather makes coming home so sweet and warm...it is 80 degrees here! |
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