Open Poetry #11 |
Welcome to My Nightmare |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Welcome to My Nightmare talking, doesn't do any good crying, makes for headaches sleep, an open window for a long buried demon, who scared the future the word, no falls on deaf ears scream, and it's devoured like an aphrodisiac claw at the putrid flesh till your senses are consumed by the rancid stench and your blood filled ears drown out the demonic rantings fall onto the shattered glass heart which you carried so gently while your hair is used as a noose and your limbs are ripped apart so your soul can be aborted by the serpents tongue Then, you can say you've slept in my bed. "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sounds like you could use some sweet dreams........I hope they come to you........ -SEA |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
whoa...i hope you only have good dreams from now on..< God bless and take care |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Ah Gee think i lived this dream a few years ago. Good writing, Love and light, Richard |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
SNOW! Highly jealous here. Wish I had written this. Applause! jwesley |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Very, very good Snow...Here's wishing you Sweet Dreams...SO much better than Nightmares... ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sounds like you've slept in mine... but i know better... there's nobody there but me... excellent writing!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that's what I've been trying to say all along. . . excellent Snow. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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