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Jump At The Chance
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Jump At The Chance |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
When life has lost its sense of logic, I lift my face to the sky And indulge in the downpour. When not an answer remains With which my heart can be satisfied, I drift away to this world Where it all comes together. I can only endure so much; After a while, My heart pulls away. Your tender kiss is no longer inviting; I don’t mind writing this sad poetry. Perhaps it’s finally arrived-- Maybe, just maybe, My world has stopped revolving around you. The thunder roars in December, So stranger things have happened. The ink that flows through this pen Is that of dignity; The soul that appears on this page Is of the character of independence. This mood’s visits are infrequent, So forgive me, Love, If I jump at the chance. I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SP~ "This mood’s visits are infrequent, So forgive me, Love, If I jump at the chance." This is perfect!  -SEA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
SNOWPANTS! This...THIS is exactly what I feel sometimes!!! And how well you've said it!!! I love it! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kris~ YOU GO GIRL! This is what I'm talking about...excellent poem penned full of your honest emotions. strong poignant piece that says a lot! so jump darlin'. i'd say you deserve some happiness. take care my friend! ~~~~~~~~~ |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
very good writing. Its good to find ones self every once in a while but never forget about the people who needs you to be a part of their lives too. I enjoyed the read, Love and light, Richard |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
You said this so perfectly..I can relate absolutely and completely with this one snowpants.. You are so ready for that "jump"... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
SP: powerful words, and I feel the same way sometimes, you have expressed your feelings very well ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Jump all you want my friend and if I am lucky then maybe I can catch you instead of that other guy.LOL Sorry, dreaming again. Very lovely poem my friend and I too loved the ending as you could tell. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
SEA: perfect?? well, thank you! I am flattered!  ps: well, I am glad to see that we think alike! thanks!! Aims: hey girlie! it was one of those moods I just had to take advantage of. thanks, as always, m'friend! -e ~~~~ Richard: thanks! and, yes, you have been giving me much to think about lately! LL: oh, more ready than you know!! I am glad you liked this!! Charisma: thanks! and, I'm sure we all feel this way at one point or another. it just takes a little more strength to actually do it! glad you liked it!! Mark: dreaming?? why would you have to be dreaming? I'd be the lucky one to have you catch me! LOL Thank you, my friend...I'm glad you liked this!!   sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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kindasorta Member
since 2000-12-02
Posts 56 |
LOL....love it!! or THANK GOD AND GREYHOUND HE'S GONE!!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Sea stole my comment!! Very well written, SP, truly enjoyed. jwesley |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
kindasorta: you are pretty funny! thanks for reading! jwesley: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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