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A Silent Knowing |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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A Silent Knowing I felt the icy wind as it blew across my chest I clutched an empty dream where our fingers once entwined I walked beside a shadow, of a memory in the mist And encased in a tiny emerald orb clinging to my lashes, our dream ... I felt an icy chill as it blew across my chest and it was then I knew you left "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
So sad.......this pulled my heart strings.......the ache is so strong.......excellent write  -SEA |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I agree with Sea, excellent! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Few words, concise thoughts, well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Snow~ A real heart-tugger this one is. Well done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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