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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
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eulogy to Kurt Wrap me in your hollow legs so I won’t look at sky. Tempt me with your galaxy, but it don’t help my eyes. Abort the fetus and the feeling. The sun’s too bright, my skin is peeling. I stay up when I should sleep to listen to you weep. The pillow was angel-soft; the wings were torn on wires. I wrapped you up in my sheets, my s___, and my fire. Abort the fetus and the feeling. The sun’s too bright, my skin is peeling. I stay up and count the trees moving in the breeze. Love the plaster stance of men and the plastic stare of sun. I never got to write a song before I shot my gun. Abort the fetus and the feeling. The sun’s too bright, my skin is peeling. I stay up when I should sleep to listen to you sleep. And I stay up when I should sleep to listen to you reap. And I stay up when I should sleep to listen to you weep. To you weep. To you weep. To you weep. [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mike~ I don't think I fully understand this one, but it sounds really neat........sorry......  ( I liked it )  -SEA |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Maybe it makes more sense now that I changed the top line slightly. If not, hey I tried (but not too hard).Mike |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think so.......I'm not going to guess though.......you might crack on me, then I'd probably cry..........but I think I get it now.......either way, very cool. -SEA |
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