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| Open Poetry #11 |
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She said/He said or is it He said/She said? |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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I didnt love you I loved you too much I didnt want you I needed you too much I couldnt have you we could never live as one You couldnt feel me my touch was always there I didnt desire you your passion stole my heart I wanted to love you you wouldnt let me in I wanted to hold you you pushed me away I felt the tears fall emotion was not there I felt my heart break you walked away I will always love you I will never love again "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Greeneyes~ this hits the heart........I felt it as she said/ she said......at different stages of life, or loving him........WONDERFUL write!!  -SEA |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oh yes, I like this much much... Felt like it was me at one time...Great read, greeneyes... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i hope you find love again..enjoyed reading and a gorgeous pic of you too.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sea~ LL~ Victoria~ I think we all, have sometimes in our life felt these feelings, said these words, they get jumbled..then you arent sure who said/felt what.....you know the story.... just my view on how it can be sometimes....thanks for the comments, and for reading they are much appreciated.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
True we all reach this point at some period of our lives, but it is the healing that is so hard. When you finally find the one who makes you think of her in the morning when you look at the sunrise and feel sad at every sunset you are apart you will never love another. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
for me, it seems to always be this way. . . thanks for this one. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
John R~ ohhhh I know the feeling all too well...there are brighter tomorrows...thanks for responding~ much appreciated... Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sven~ for me as well....wishing you peace, and Happy Holidays...thanks for letting me know you stopped by... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Greeneyes~ i liked this a lot! wonderful writing and you have captured your thoughts and feelings quite remarkably. excellent form and this just flowed so smoothly. i read it as she said/she said as well. just my perspective. great write! take care ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I never read it as she said/she said....but re-reading it in that light puts a different meaning as well to me.... I appreciate you taking the time to let me know your views... Happy Holidays, With PeaceGreeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Greeneyes, Well said. Sometimes things are not really what they seem. Powerful poem. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lone Wolf~ Indeed sometimes not....but I learn from these writings and move forward....though sometimes thats even hard...Thank you for your comments.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Love can be a lot of things ... but they all seem to revolve around 'two' ... working together ~ very sad |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
RAM~ Indeed your words are true...thank you for sharing your thoughts with me...it is much appreciated... Happy Holidays, With PeaceGreeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is so hard on the heart to learn to love again and trust again especially when so much of ones self is made vulnerable to what we hope and feel to be so right but ends up so wrong. Wonderful read my friend and don't be afraid to reach out again when the time is right. Live, laugh, love as they say........and I have to agree with whoever THEY is. Happy Holidays and may you find the days and the season filled with love and smiles.< !signature--> A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-19-2000).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
so very timely - struck home much too hard - Hope it's a 'passing' thing |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Mark~ when the time is right, hopefully arms will open, and it will be right...thank you for such kind words.... Greeneyes~ ***. "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill~ a 5 year passing thing....but you know the story....I hope you are well dear friend... thanks Bill....Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Greeneyes, Great work here, sorry this is sad but from your replys it looks like you have gleamed wisdom from it, I also don't think I have had the pleasure of meeting you yet so welcome to passions and I look foreword to more of your work. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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