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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-21 03:14 PM



It's Your Eyes That I See

The stars shine brightly but it's your eyes that I see
I'm not looking at the sky its beauty is not for me
The moon softly glows but it doesn't delight my eyes
I think only of the magic wrapped within your sighs
The world is full of wonder but it can all pass me by
I only want your kiss to take me spiraling up so high

The sun can send her warmth to spread all over me
But I don't need her heat I'm as warm as I can be
The heat comes from the passion of a burning hot fire
I'm caught in your mesh of flames as it leaps higher
Dreams can take me to paradise wrapped in charms
But you take me there when I'm held within your arms

Your smile is full of fire its beauty caresses me
And in your kisses I can feel loves truth holding me
I'm amazed by your touch the magic is loves desire
I never understood before its power is liquid fire
I'm filled with joy and wonder, I'm a burning flame
When you take me on loves ride I call out your name


Marsha
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-21-2000).]

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White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
1 posted 2000-12-21 03:39 PM


This feeling?  I have felt it somewhere before.  Oh I remember now.  What joyful memories have I.  Thank you for bringing them back to me in this very well done piece.  Thank you for sharing.  Well done.


The White Wolf

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2 posted 2000-12-21 03:51 PM


~~~BIG SIGH~~~ loved it Lady, Very good writing.
Love and light,
Richard

Marsha
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3 posted 2000-12-21 06:00 PM


White Wolf, thank you, I'm glad the memories returned, I really do thank you for stopping by.
Take care
                Marsha
                    
Richard, thank you very muchly, that is a real compliment, and so nice of you to say so.
Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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4 posted 2000-12-21 06:48 PM


Marsha, just say this poem is for me and I'll die happy!  
Marsha
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5 posted 2000-12-21 08:33 PM


'Deer, well I could lie I suppose,   (Because I can lie,.... around here , or around there,   My version of vouslez vous couchez avec moi sa soir perhaps.) Chance would be a fine thing, to lie dear 'Deer, keep up!

So yes of course 'Deer this is of a certainty for you. Well, since I discovered your devotion to spam you know, I thought, Oh la! Now there's a man who has some taste and style.  

Take care kid  
                Mushy
                  
            Merry Christmas


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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