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Open Poetry #11

Does that make sense?

artsygrl
Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 55
Florida

0 posted 2000-12-17 02:44 PM

What is truth?
I can no longer be strong,
As age is reminding me that I have emptiness,
It is flashing pictures of tenderness,
And I have denied reason,
God, I sit and meditate trying to talk to you,
Trying to listen to the voice that whispers
But I cannot hear the whispering,
I cannot tell the reasoning
All I feel is the lonely.

Happiness sits deep-rooted in my eyes because I know there is a God above,
But the sadness of wanting to do so much shines an uncertainty,
Dark wide eyes they tell me,
Full of warmth yet tinged with shadows

And I am not the dark person yet I feel the pain
Sensing it over and over again
Because I miss him yet I have not meet him yet,
Does that make sense to anyone?
-Barbara M. Brewer-

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-12-17 02:55 PM

ah...yes, it makes sense to me...but I don't know if that's a consolation to you, lol...

You've written the longing well, artsy one!

"all I feel is the lonely"

Sighs and hugs.

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

2 posted 2000-12-17 03:01 PM

Barbara....
It certainly does make sense to me.
May you find what you're looking for, and soon.
Hugs

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

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