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One Day....inspired by Fallen Rain:"Diamond falling
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One Day....inspired by Fallen Rain:"Diamond falling |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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One Day... rain fall sometimes in cascade and once when sun will shine rain fades, but for now I need your voice your presence but there's no other choice than silence need you in my time of sorrow your advice when I have to face tomorrow tearful eyes conscious what I'll miss my grief of feelings that insist retrieve yearn for your love and care this night but what I truly aware is fright embrace me in my need contain diamonds who are falling now cold rain shall I ever find the rainbow and sane knowing how you taught me have faith whither journey of life will guide God illuminate the way of life with Guardians light knowing that answers will be there for me showing that you will be forever a part of my heart and one day we will meet again ever till then I must behold my faith and believe thence God's Love will truly relief always. Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a tender heart you have, Charisma! Just Beautiful! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Charisma--Lovely poem. Excellent writing.. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Charisma, quote: This is so very true. Your message is a powerful one, and beautifully penned.  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, Lovely melancholia. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful! Well Done Charisma Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Serenity: thank you for your kind words. poeminister: thank you for the excellent Irie: thank you for your wonderful reply and I appreciate your kind words very much. seymour: thank you for taking time to read and reply Dark Angel: thanks for your lovely words, and for passing by. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, Beautiful message my friend. This one was a little different style for you, but I loved it. Well written! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Charisma, this is wonderful writing... and I love the creative presentation as well it being inspired by another poets work makes it even more lovely in it sincerety. very well done take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Til than I must behold my faith and believe." Seems like I am in much the same place as you right now...it is a test of my strength and resolve...funny how I desire this opportunity when many other times I simply shrug and go on...James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is so very sweet of you to do.......the rainbow will come after the storm, it always does......beautiful poem from such a sweet heart! -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
LW: yes this one is indeed a little different style, but it came this way up...and all I could do was to write it down. JM: thank you for your kind words, and I am so glad that you love it all. James: believing is always a test, and we will grow in strength and resolve, sometimes its hard to believe that, but well I've experience that several times. and yep it's quite easier to shrug and go on....but deep down in our hearts we know ...we do know that we must behold faith. SEA: thank you my friend, and you are so right.....the rainbow always comes after the storm.....that's a wonderful promise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
just because.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Just a lovely compliment to be inspired by another poet. This is certainly a beautifully rendering from that inspiration. You did a marvelous creation with the formatting also. Very pleasant to read your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Charisma, wonderful write. enjoyed much. Its so nice to be inspired by another poet, and a lovely tribute to her. Parker |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: thank you for your kind comment, I am very happy that you liked it. Parker: you too thank you for your kind reply, and yes its great to be inspired by someones poetry. I can't come in the next week, so I want to wish you all   have some wonderful loving holliday's my friends. love Charisma |
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