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My Heart Seeks
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My Heart Seeks |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
My Heart Seeks By Richard Maxfield 12-17-2000 With pen in hand I write words of love To my lady unknown Pouring my heart My soul, my life’s blood Into penned dreams In dreamless fantasies We dance through the night My lips at your neck We go to secret places Where we share romance Love divine I sleep each night Pulling my pillow close Wishing it was you Waiting for the day We come face to face Unite into one spirit Until that day comes I see you in my dreams I feel you in my soul My love will wait For the one and only My heart seeks |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I sleep each night Pulling my pillow close Wishing it was you I do this all the time...made me smile here Richard...this is a lovely poem of longing... Here's hoping for you that you find everything that you dream of! |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you dear lady for your comment. i wish you and i both the best in the search. LOL some time I might have to just go looking again. I hate the singles seen. So many games and lies. Love and light, Richard |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
*Sigh* This is a beautiful tribute to your lady to be. I hope you keep this one so when you find her.... you can give it to her! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Dear Lady for your comment. i have so many poems to give my lady when she comes along. Love and light, Richard |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Even more sighs from me, I really felt the longing in your poem, as I too feel this way about my knight unknown. You have a great talent to express so much in few lines and few words. The three lined verses were very effective and it flowed very well. This poem read as both a hopeful yet sorrowful piece to me and that's why it touched me on many levels. I look forward to more poems by you  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Melissa for your comments. I do my best to say more with less. it can be hard some times but then if I cut the fluf out and get to what I want to say its not that hard. Love and light, Richard |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Richard, When you find her, you must show her this so she can see that all along you were dreaming of her . . . patiently waiting . . . Wonderful writing. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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