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John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

0 posted 2000-12-17 12:08 PM

Love, Come Anon

The battle rages within
and the night fills with endless sighs.
I have held the rose,
seen blood drip
from its silver thorns,
tasted the salt of tears
drowning in love's debris
and heard the voice of sin
ringing in my ears.
Let me drink from the waters of Lethe
and let my memories
on the winds of AElus be scattered.
Let death be my release from pain,
if love be the curse,
bringing to my ears
the whisper of her voice,
as only an echo of the past.

If a dream touches us,
it exists to us as anything
else that touches us.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2000-12-17 12:13 PM

love it john..nicely written..

i love dark romance..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

2 posted 2000-12-17 12:35 PM

*sigh* dear one, my heart will ever bleed for your pain. Much love to you from me.
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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2000-12-17 02:47 AM

Another one very well done! I love the idea and the flow through...this certainly isn't your first stop at the poetry well to draw from the words of life.....or cliched you didn't just fall off the turnip truck!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-12-17 02:24 PM

There is an enchantment in this, I can't explain it, but it seems haunting. I enjoyed it very much.

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2000-12-17 10:12 PM

John R

Let death be my release from pain,
if love be the curse,
bringing to my ears
the whisper of her voice,
as only an echo of the past.

so many times I had felt this...only with his voice instead...you expressed yourself well...thank you for sharing your feelings

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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