Open Poetry #11 |
To The East |
maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
To The East By Richard Maxfield 12-16-2000 As tear drops fall Slowly washing pain From my soul Dreams like taunting memories Invade my night Leaving me weak Left in a vacuum Eyes see not Through the darkness Mind spinning In confusion Looking for reality Heart screaming In silence echo Seeking peace Standing alone Watching the sun set Darkness invading I turn to the east To face the new dawn Wanting what it will dring |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* dear friend, I pray you find happiness and love. Your words touch the heart, dear one. I have faith that someday they will bring her into your arms where she belongs. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
ever changing emotions when i read your work... another keeper.. ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Startime for your comment. Lady thank you for your comment. Yes I do still write about the break up. Even tho the pain has gone I still look back when I get lonley. LOL it must be the season. Love and light, Richard |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Richard...past pain makes for wonderful poetry from you, and although I am sorry for the reasons I love what you write... Ignore those who would clip your wings...fly ever upward...even if it means scorched wings |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you Paula fpr all your wonderful comments. It seems we have some things in common. I try not to look back to often but then it was the hardest time in my life so its hard not to. But it does fade more every day. Love and light, Richard |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How long before the pain goes away, Richard..you do write well of it ~soft smiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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