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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-17 05:54 AM

Hardened Tears

Heavily sent, this early morn
the hardened tears from heaven's eyes
awakening in darkened dreams
of thunder rolling, beating sighs.

Thoughts of missing, holding arms
kisses once, or twice before
overpowering sense of touch
the thunder rolls, still wanting more.

Flooding now, a heart that yearns
to fill this way, to pound for love
a feel to last throughout from you
each reigny day that mysts above.

Sometimes I pray the answers come
but deep inside the heart does know
time will offer what it can
when moving forward in this, life's "show".

Today I press my thoughts to you
remembering, I love you much
the brush of hair above my brow
from gentle hands that sweep loves touch.

The way you look into my eyes
questioning the moves I make
each one causes one more day
to pass me by, the hurts they take.

Another roar has reached within
like fires furnace, rising heat
turning thoughts that flood to mist
leaving words, "till next we meet".

~Wynter

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"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-17-2000).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-12-17 07:26 AM

Reading twice, the play on words is wonderful...well done Wynter...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-12-17 09:04 AM

yes, I believe you "got" it

thank you Karilea for always responding with a kind word...huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

3 posted 2000-12-17 09:32 AM

This is my first read of you....and I like.

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2000-12-17 03:31 PM

I love this. Excellent writing.

Poeminister

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

5 posted 2000-12-17 04:17 PM

wonderful metaphor...love it.

Charisma

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-12-17 07:46 PM

like the ice of morn. . .

excellent Wynter. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2000-12-17 07:59 PM

Evening Wynter,

Yes, I feel as I read the words, you have left a mark. Very nice, and keep writing.

BC

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2000-12-17 08:02 PM

Hey...soft hugs and warm wishes.

Have a happy holiday. You will be in my thoughts, m'friend.

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2000-12-17 08:55 PM

Simply heartbreaking. This is beautiful.
Sandra

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2000-12-17 09:29 PM

and Robert B. I thank you for that...the first and..the liking

*smiles*

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

John R
Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 141
Toledo OH

11 posted 2000-12-17 09:35 PM

Well written. Time is cruel when you are not with the one you love.

If a dream touches us,
it exists to us as anything
else that touches us.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2000-12-17 09:40 PM

Poeminister- thank you, glad you could enjoy my words today

Charisma- hmmmm yes...I did twist my words a bit this morning to mean several things

Sven- yes ice of morn the other day..and thunderstorms meeting the warm to cold and wind on this morn...such drastic opposites in weather...thank you all

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2000-12-17 09:49 PM

Bill- well my words always mean different things to different persons..but they are always from the heart..and if they touch you, then I am pleased...watch for that bar bill ok?

~Wynter< !signature-->

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-17-2000).]

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