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Tag-Along Within A Song
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Tag-Along Within A Song |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tag-Along Within A Song ~*Marge Tindal*~ Tag along within a song harmonized by two No solo blowing long, low and blue when only a duet will do Sweet melodies sung with stars to be strung upon a heart so true Echoes refrain of love's regain when only a classic will do Pluck the strings within the strains of orchestrated concerto Baton raised high, touching the sky play on please, dear Maestro ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge, this is truly wonderful, I can hear the music, I can feel the rhythm, is this glorious, it's certainly is. Wonderful writing, utterly wonderful. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, play on please. This was delightful. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~    you always sing my favorite song!! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Ahhh, yes, the rhythm ! Thanks for singing ! StarTime~ Thanks for the delight. SEA~ That's cause you are a CLASSIC ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I hear your poetic tune in my head right now my friend. Encore, encore!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
And no maestro could refuse you, Marge, anything. Neat, uplifting piece, so true. jwesley |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-Sweet melody, sweet words, very nicely done indeed! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay......just who the heck is this Maestro fella and what is he doing touching your sky with his baton?  Wonderful write my friend. Only you could could make a chorus of words sound this tempting a beautiful. Hugs to ya. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Iffen I had to pick a singing buddy - you'd surely be it ! You've never missed a beat ! JWesley~ I think there is a singer among my kitchen cabinet muses ! They keep breaking out in song ! Gemini~ Thank you for hearing the melody. MarkB~ Tee-Hee ! I'm giggling at your reply ... and trying hard to resist the urge to type the first reply that popped in my head. Oh, I'm BAD !  But - he's got a nice baton ! TAG ! You're it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So is he practiced at twirling the baton as well or is he just one for the orchestra "pit"? Tag your it my friend. Stay out of the whiskey before you reply.LOL A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
On second thought,,,,,,,PULEASEEEEEEEEEEE don't answer that one.........I can't handle knowing that someone else holds the tune to your heart my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ LOL ! ! AND, I don't drink anything stronger than Coca~Cola ! ! ! LOL @ PULEASEEEEEEEEEEEE ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge~ I found myself singing a little tune to this, it was wonderful! Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Thanks for grabbing a note and hanging on. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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