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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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With just a few words You made me believe. And that might seem absurd For you could have deceived. But I chose to trust All that you had to say And found that I must Have your smile in my day. Dependence on you Was at odds with my style But I quickly knew I'd looked a long while To find someone so strong, So loving, so sharing. It couldn't be wrong To give you my caring. Yours from the start I'll love you forever. Take care of my heart For my lifetime endeavor Will be to see joy Shine from your face All my talents employ To make sure that the place You want to be Is close to my side. Through eternity This love will abide! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
It's cold outside, think I'll leave it there, It's warm inside, I like it here, Ate a biscuit, coffee's perking, Suthern dear, are you here lurking? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With just a few words You made me believe. And that might seem absurd For you could have deceived. But I chose to trust All that you had to say And found that I must Have your smile in my day. Dependence on you Was at odds with my style But I quickly knew I'd looked a long while To find someone so strong, So loving, so sharing. It couldn't be wrong =============== beautiful poem of promise and dedication girlie-girl ... and how wonderful to see these emotions from your pen... perfect title take care care jm |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
JM: Thank you so much! *S* Toerag: Yup.... *G* SMOOCH! So share that coffee! *G* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-19-2000).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hi ya gal....remember...Thanksgiving day I'll be playing , and the following weekend, I'm laying out to watch brother's house, and beer and food and computer.....I'm off to church now....see ya online then....if you dare!!!!! |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Nice piece here,suthern.Mellifluous,flowed well. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sweet words and a tender tribute... -Tier |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
suthern, I was immediately impressed by this lovely piece, write on. Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Tony, Tiersdin, & Kethry: Thank you all so very much. I only posted this one cause it was in a file and available to toss onto the forums when I was trying to catch up with Toe. *G* Your kind responses are greatly appreciated! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well i don't get here very often anymore, but am glad i didn't miss this one, i wish i could write in rhyme with such ease  great poem |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
LOve to read a poem with positive thinking about love and this is a well written one.. a little dash of positive goes a long way to brighten everyone's day...good work!! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ah, suthern, all of that misguided love!! Breaks my heart, it does! But then I guess everyone needs somebody to love them...even Toerags. Thank God he's got you!!  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
jellybeans: But your visits are worth waiting for! *S* Thank you... though someone who writes free verse as well as you do has no one to envy! *S* ethome: Thank you very much. *S* Balladeer: 'tain't misguided... *G*... just unwanted! LOL. And I know the high esteem you have for that man... so you really should be giving him your sympathy for having to put up with me instead of thanking God he keeps me out of YOUR hair! LOL. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
He's very lucky my friend, very lucky.. HUSG MotherHen |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Suthern~ You know I love this Making me grin big!!  Very sweet! You are both wonderful!! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suthern~ This is such a lovely affirmation of the heart. *Hugs* n' stuff ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
RG: I'm the lucky one. *S* For whatever I may lack in life, I'm blessed with friends that enrich my heart, brighten my existence, and make this jaded soul believe in true goodness... I treasure them. *S* SEA & Marge: Thankie kindly, dear ladies. *S* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Your heart definitely shows here, my friend, wonderful write. jwesley |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I Suthern--What a heart warming poem...and a lovely heart that I hear so sweetly singing. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
jwesley & Martie: Your words warm this heart. *S* Thank you! But Martie... Cuz I luvs you lots, I'll give you this hint... You REALLY don't want to hear me sing! LOL |
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