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brian madden
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0 posted 2000-12-16 02:57 PM


Forgive me of my foolishness
Understand these thoughts.
Crawling in the sheets with
Keys under lock, us children
In summer bliss from
Noon to the end of the day, our
Garden is so beautiful, come celebrate.

Youth passes quickly,
Over such a short time,
Universes fade, but never us.

Instantly we are one
Superior in motive.

All I desire
Love and
Lust, you are all I desire.

Intenseā€¦.

desires burning
Ever turning,
Scandals played  
In our flirting haze.
Red bows for this season
Eternal joy wrapped in the depth of your arms



"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-16 03:17 PM


Some Christmas delights just won't remain under a tree...

well done Brian...

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
2 posted 2000-12-16 03:45 PM


Very good writing. i enjoyed the read.
Love and life,
Richard

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2000-12-16 03:55 PM


This brought me back to a day, brian, one that I cherish always...and to keep it PG, let's just say? It was the first and only time, that I ever rolled in the arms of pure bliss...and yes, that is what I'm thinking of while another "he" watches wrestling...grin...thank you, for the euphoric re-play. and hey? If y'have the time, drop me an e---would love to hear about your adventures/misadventures at college. C'mon, we'll swap a few stories, and I bet I still can kick butt at quarter bounce...(gotta catch it on an edge...)Hugs to me Irish bud.
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-12-16 05:45 PM


Forgive me of my foolishness
Understand these thoughts.
Crawling in the sheets with
Keys under lock, us children
In summer bliss from
Noon to the end of the day, our
Garden is so beautiful, come celebrate.
Youth passes quickly,
Over such a short time,
Universes fade, but never us.
================
desires burning
Ever turning,
Scandals played  
In our flirting haze.
Red bows for this season
Eternal joy wrapped in the depth of your arms
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so..ya got your Christmas gift early huh?  *smile* ...
very very cool poem Bri-gator
you must have been very good this year  
I need to put some Euphoria on my Xams wish list...that and a MUSE that sticks around  
so great to see your name here ...
another gift given early  
later-lusty-gator
eve

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Victoria
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5 posted 2000-12-16 06:54 PM


Enjoyed Brian...very nice indeed.

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
6 posted 2000-12-17 07:50 AM


oh you know i loved this! looks like an email is coming your way about this...  
~Dawn

"Like a soul without a mind, in a body without a heart, Im missing every part." Unfinished Sympathy-Massive Attack

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

7 posted 2000-12-17 02:23 PM


send some of this my way......it's wonderful!

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh



brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
8 posted 2000-12-21 04:15 PM


Karliea, yes I hope so, I will be watching my stocking eagerly. Thanks for reading.

Richard, thank you.

serenity, well I know where to go to give the R rated version, keep a close eye on the adult forum.   thanks for the reply.

Jan, well I haven't got the gift yet but I am praying Santa will be able to bring it to me. thanks for reading.

Victoria, thanks for reading.

Dawn, just a preview of your Christmas present.   enjoy, it is wrapped up with a lovely bow. thanks for reading

Kathleen, no I am feeling greedy, ok if there any left over maybe. thanks.




"In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more
As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division

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