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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-12-18 05:39 AM


Arigato

They say the best way to get over someone you care for is to try someone new.
I supppose I'll have to try that but I'm not so sure if it's true.
Seems like it might work if you're not too crazy about the one that's gone.
And if you still have lots of feelings for the one that's gone doesn't that make it harder to move on?
Maybe I can't be what you want me to be.
I can only be who I am.
I have given the best that I have.  You decide if that's good or bad.
I never gave up an opportunity to spend a moment with you.
I will never lose an opportunity to share my whole life with you.
You could satisfy me if I could fit into your plan.
If you like me go ahead and give me a try.
If you don't you are right to say goodbye.
Please don't live a lie.
This is not the last word on this subject that I know so well.
Not the last feeling, thought, desire or sleepless night.
Quite possibly I could suffer for awhile within the effect of it all.
Or perhaps I will discover I was totally wrong
and her instincts were right.
What the hell.  This is life.
You grow to love it or you grow to hate it.
Give me all you got. I live to love it and I love to live it.

Thanks...

Jameslee@December18,2000
tryingtounderstandJackie
She'sJackieChan



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Charisma
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1 posted 2000-12-18 05:50 AM


oh James, lost love is always so hard to let go....seeing how you are suffering, touched me by your words, I know how it is, and once you will get over her, and will find new love, but first you have to accept your lost and recover from your pain....and that need time.

take care my friend

((warm hugs))
Charisma

Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-12-18 05:53 AM


James my friend, it is never easy but pain does go away and the wounds will heal.  Charisma said it better than I could so the rest of is just as she said it.  
Great write as usual.

ethome
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3 posted 2000-12-18 06:31 AM


Me too James I like to live it too...no matter what happens you'll be dealing with this intense situation until time washes all but the memories from your heart...then maybe the frustration and pain will disappear...well written dear friend I fell right into the way you feel.....ethome
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4 posted 2000-12-18 10:36 AM


yes you have told me of jackie..the one with the wonderful kiss..hopefully one day you will say thank God for unanswered prayers..HUGS..WHEN you find your true love


               ~Victoria~

                


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



SEA
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5 posted 2000-12-18 11:43 AM


James~ I hope you find your true love soon...... hugs sweetie!   -SEA
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-12-19 08:31 AM


thank you Charisma, Mark, ethome, Victoria and Sea for the nice reponses...
I need to take the pressure off of myself and settle for a nice friendship..this falling in love stuff is too stressful sometimes...but its fun also...James

Tony Abbot
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7 posted 2000-12-19 08:34 AM


Ah..relationships,so complicated.Great poem,my friend.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

Startime
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8 posted 2000-12-19 10:57 AM


*sigh*oh, sweet one, I am so sorry for your pain. Love, oh yes, though desired, can be so very painful. With a heart like yours is love will surely find you and give you the best friendship you could ever want. Hugs to you, sweet man. Much love from my heart to your heart.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2000-12-21 03:58 PM


Thank you so much Tony and Startime...Arigato...James
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