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Hear My Voice
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
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I wrote this poem in 3 language, English...netherlands and the language of Indonesia. all contain the same message.  author: a child of Ambon. Hear my voice Hear the voice of my heart when I call out to you strangers drive my people apart by violence so hard and cruel my people always lived in harmony and now forced to separate powerless near insanity help the Moluccan before it will be to late. Hoor de stem van mijn hart wanneer ik u aanroep vreemden drijven mijn volk uiteen begaan gewelddadigheden zo cru mijn volk leefde altijd in harmonie en worden nu gedwongen uiteen te gaan wij staan machteloos, zijn bijna krankzinnig Help de Molukken, voordát het te laat is. Dengar suara dari hatiku kalau beta memanggil ale orang luar pecah belah kita melaksanakan perkosa luar biasa bangsa kita hidup dalam keselarasan tindakan kekarasan bagai lain sama jng lain tidak berdaya, hampir sakit djiwa sioh tolong Maluku, sebelum terlambat e Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh my such amazing talent. You send us all a very strong message and I pray we take it to heart. Much love to you from me. Thank you so much for sharing this with me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Charisma, as I read this poem I think of my own country's (Ireland) turmoiled past, "strangers drive my people apart by violence so hard and crue my people always lived in harmony and now forced to separate" it is such a simple question, but one that is hard to answer WHY CAN'T WE ALL LIVE TOGETHER IN PEACE. A powerfully written poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
Charisma Power in poetry will defeat any sword always... This is indeed a powerful poem that has an important message and I like it alot... Nice work -Ramses- |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Startime: thank you for your kind words, and hey you are the one who is an amazing talent...and thank you so much for your pra, we need that. Brian: yes Ireland have his own turmoiled past......and wish that your words were that simple.....wished that we could live in peace. Ramses: thank you for your wonderful words, and I truly hope that powerful poetry can defeat any sword.....sounds so hopeful thank you all for stopping by and to reply. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ You are a compassionate poet. Prayers are sent from this little corner of the world every day. Bless you for reaching out with your words to spread the message. Love n' hugs~ P.S. I got the most wonderful e-mail inquiry from a gentleman who visited your web page and read my 'Cry Wolf' poem on it ... Thank you sweet friend for sharing my thoughts with others. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you Marge, and it's the only thing I can do.........hope so it will stop..thank you for your prayers... and I am glad that a gentleman mailed you, after reading your poem. and I truly hope that he like it.... (((hugs)) Charisma |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
a very heartfelt plea...i too wish it were as easy as brians words above...for us to all live peacefully..but alas..we live in a sinful world..  but one day.....  we will know peace!hugs, fallen |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I am in total agree with all above charisma, and unfortunately it seems, as our world continues to turn, the peace your, and similar peoples have known so long, is disappearing through the greed of others. My heart and my prayers to you and yours. jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Charisma, May your voice be heard before it is too late for you people. Violence never solves anything. Peace to you. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My friend this is so wonderful and it shows just how compassionate you truely are, but of course we all knew that a long time ago. Peace in this world would be nice and unfortunately it seems that there will never be an answer that all would accept even though love of man and of God is all the answer that is needed. Wonderful write my friend and prayers for you and your people for sure. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
fallen rain: thank you for your kind words, and I hope that we will find peace. jwesley: thank you for your reply...and I am greatful for your prayers they are so needed. LW: thank you for your wonderful reply, and hope that we will have peace soon. Mark: thank you my friend, and I your prayers are appreciated very much.....wish that Love could stop this madness....but all we can do is hope and pray for peace. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Here I can hardly communicate is American english and you write in 3 languages. Wow. They continue in my prayers. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
interloper: thank you for your kind words, and for your prayers they are so needed. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice message Charisma...hoping for better days...James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ THis is so pwerful......your talent really shines!! -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you James and Sea for your kind words. they are appreciated very much. |
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