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Open Poetry #11

Ruts in Snow---REVISED

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2000-12-15 10:22 AM

Ruts in Snow
Virginia Salter

ruts in snow
trail off in both directions
one, the memory of your coming
the anticipation
the joy
the other
the echo of your going

© December 14, 2000

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-12-15 10:25 AM

VAS~ this is so sad.........I love it......it touches the heart quick and sharp.

-SEA

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2000-12-15 10:56 AM

Well done, my friend...short, to the point, large in content. Enjoyed!

jwesley

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2000-12-15 11:19 AM

Thank you both for reading and your uplifting, encouraging comments!!

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