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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
A firefly gives light and dances through the rain but pales against the night in poetry refrain She calls to far off thunder and weeps along the glen and hides her wings to wonder if she will heal again Go dance, dance on my firefly and live in song and fly! For no one would believe, between the words, you cry. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There's a lovely message here, emily.. and you've crafted a wonderful poem around it... Nice work, indeed..  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Emily~ This is very nicely done. I love the sparkle of fireflies !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Good work, Emily!  |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
this is very good. wonderful and touching work. KM every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, its light is puny against the night and i can see why this firefly feels so overwhelmed... but then its light always lifts up our spirits..so lovely , these things are... go fly on and awe us with your beauty, firefly... Nice thought poem..i enjoyed the read  |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Nan: I'm glad you saw the message in this one, thank you! Marge: Yes, sparkle..thank you Elizabeth: I'm glad you read, and thank you for telling me. Wesley...I appreciate it. Kalie: you saw so much in this, I'm happy about that |
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