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If You Find Love
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If You Find Love |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
IF YOU FIND LOVE by Richard Maxfield 3-26-99 If you find love Hold on tight Hold each other Through the night With youth and passion We did say Forever in love We will stay As years went by Our love did grow She gave me children Our love to show I loved her like No one could I gave my all As I should Each day that passed I loved her more Love was free Never a chore I kissed her face Touched her hair Her with me Not a care Years came Years went My life with her I had spent Looking forward To the day Just her and I Could run away Not for ever But just awhile To touch her face Kiss her smile Each day that passed Lines did form Keeping each other safe From life’s storm As time passed The light grew clear More time to love Was growing near I woke one day To hear her say I am leaving you Alone today I thought it was Just a bad dream I tried to wake With a scream She said Found another I cant be your wife Or a mother She took her things Went away Nothing I did wrong She did say I sit and cry What went wrong With love so good For so long I am left alone With pain and sorrow Taken away Hopes of tomorrow If you find love Hold on tight Hold each other Through the night You can never know If love will stay Forever Or just a day copyright # RM99R4 |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...its all true....you just never know...  this is a sad little tale of love ... hugs..g< !signature--> "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you for your comment. life has many twist and turns that we must deal with. Sad that some people dont understand the mark they leave on others hearts. Love and light, Richard |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm so sorry......this broke my heart............hugs to you -SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Richard, I feel the pain that must have inspired this piece. Life is always funny and nothing really is certain . . . especially in affairs of the heart. May your poetry help to heal your broken heart my friend. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice work!!!!!!!  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
AWWW Richard...this just tore my heart in two...to give your heart only to have it handed back to you...hugs...and hey if you weant to talk...just email me ok? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is so true and it's sad how humans treat each other sometimes. Very good presentation!! |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aww, Richard...How I feel your hurt..Strange how someone can walk all over the heart of another and not see the footprints of pain they leave there..Hope it feels better soon.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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