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athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

0 posted 2000-12-14 04:48 PM

Portrait

I cannot portray
the immense depth of love
you've sculptured in my life.

I see only beauty with you.
And I adorn every facet
of breathless imagery.

I reach for you in undying conquest,
as I feel the victory
of your passions inside me.
Your hair scatters down in ripples
of satin across my skin.
Your naked fire loses me
in echoes of magnificence
and raging fury.

The amber shadow of your silhouette
dances as one with my own,
and the warmth of your breath
fills me in glory beyond infinity.

Your motions take me higher,
and I sail on cascades of beauty
and awesome ambiance.

Together we lay silent.
Aglow in embers of this scarlet portrait
...I paint only for you.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2000-12-14 05:03 PM

*sigh* you write of the most beautifully, sensual love. Fantastic. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

2 posted 2000-12-14 05:45 PM

Startime,
You can relate to the true depth of my writing. Thank you for being there...
Much love, Elise

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-12-14 06:25 PM

You have painted a beautiful portrait here. Love it.
Sandra

Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today.
— James Dean

Ramses
Junior Member

since 2000-12-14

Posts 40
Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway

4 posted 2000-12-14 06:32 PM

Hello Athena...

Love this..Realy romantic and beautiful

-Ramses-

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

5 posted 2000-12-14 08:26 PM

Startime,
Your words of kindness always make me want to write more and more. Thank you, my friend.
Much love, Elise

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

6 posted 2000-12-14 08:30 PM

Sandra,
I know the portrait you want to paint. Don't put away those paintbrushes just yet. Don't cast away the dream...
Love you, Elise

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

7 posted 2000-12-14 08:31 PM

Ramses,
Hello. Thank you for the sweet reply. Hope to see more of you.
Elise

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2000-12-30 12:49 PM

paint yourself again poet of heart
and show me the finest of your art
and with the brush of your pen
make me believe again. . .

beautiful Elise. . . just beautiful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

roselee
Junior Member

since 2000-09-22

Posts 26

9 posted 2000-12-30 11:15 AM

A very romantic poem, excellent!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2000-12-30 11:18 AM

Somebody hand me the brush! Good Lord in heaven what a piece of passionate writing.
I used to paint by numbers but I never felt the urge to go for the canvas as I did after reading this! ummm ummmm

forgive me, I'm in a mood today!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

11 posted 2000-12-30 02:52 PM

Irish Rose,
Thank you for the beautiful response. I hope you will paint many masterpieces in your life...
Love, Elise

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