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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Sven The Prince With The Magic Pen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Within him cries the human soul, and after all is read in time, through shades of kindness he bestows his magic pen on precious minds. Each morsel from his gifted hand, has always lived as he has shown, in greatness where the heart drops land within the treasured and the known. And through the ancient tales of knights in sadness, victory or war, grows there the tales of his delight his princely energy secure. Through him the sacred tales fulfilled, in yarns of coursing magic hurled, are lived by all in scenes that thrill, in magic prince's gallant world. The heart that from a boisterious laugh, from page to page, from line to line, flows upward to a charm that lasts, where all imagined graces shine. Gift to me now, to state my mind in some way measured from my needs appearing from the taste of time the prince's magic pen I read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome...how marvelous and how well expressed! Sven does indeed gift us all with many, many kind words and magic moments...and you Sir have done both him and yourself justice with this piece. We shall all salute you Sir! May the Knight rule the Day! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Karilea I appreciate those comments very much and I agree with the words on Sven....ethome |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Oh yes, dear friend. You have captured the beautiful heart of this man. He indeed has a pen that flows with incredible magic. How delightful. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you ethome for recognizing the talents of this wonderful writer. Of all the poets here at passions, Sven has changed the most and soured the highest in the quality and beauty of his work and that has been highlighted in his gallery. This is a beautiful tribute Liz |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Your words are so true! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful poem, you said it all quite perfectly. Sven is a prince indeed. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
P T this is so wonderful, a brilliant piece by you describing an artist. Excellant work love really great writing, utterly wonderful. As a fine a poem about a fabulous poet as I've seen. Really terrific Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*speechless* somehow my friend, "Thank you" just doesn't seem enough. . . I'm amazed, humbled, touched, and a lot of other words I can't seem to remember right now. . . thank you, thank you. . . To those that have replied to this already. . . I am indeed honored to count you not only as peers, but friends. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Your phrases seem to turn to effortlessly, with vivid imaging and fluid rhythm/rhyme. This one is by far no exception. It DANCED! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool E-babes...he deserves this for all the tributes hes done of fellow poets ... and you captured his poetic spirit well... love that last verse ... later-vantastic-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh ethome...yes you have captured the very essence of this graceful poet...what a wonderful gift to him you have written...and to us who read your beautiful poetry... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Startime (sweet Karen) for the encouraging words and the reference to Sven. Thanks Elizabeth he certainly has done a marvelous job on the gallery of poets and what a wonderful and unique idea he put into the works!! Thanks inot2B for the comment appreciated so much! Thank you Catalina Moon I enjoyed your kind thought so much. Marsha I do so love your exuberant replies you are so vibrant and encouraging and I know Sven appreciates your words. Sven what can I say my friend you've done us proud here at Passions and you deserve the recognition and praise and may you continue forever with your kindly poetic ways ....ethome Thanks VAS I appreciate your effortlessly comment I wish it was that easy. However, I sure am glad you took the time to read. Take care.......ethome Thanks my poetic pet for your kind words. I always appreciate hearing from you...and I'm so happy you like the last verse it always seems to be the hardest one for me. Janet the VANtastic you are a poet pal!! Thanks so much Paula I really enjoyed your comment and I enjoyed giving this gift to him ...take care dear poet friend...ethome |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a wonderful tribute to a gentle, and romantic spirit Ethome! After all Sven's beautiful tributes to so many others ... it's lovely to see that you've returned this thoughtfullness with captivating insights into this wonderful poet. Nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ethome...oh my, you have captured this wonderful poet so well in this amazing poem, he is indeed the prince with the magic pen Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Kit and thanks for the words of kindness about Sven...he truly has been delightful with his kind pen in describing others...thanks again for taking the time to read. Thank you charisma for your words and your kindness I know Sven will appreciate it very much......ethome |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Huggle bunny, you caught the passions plague, and demonstrated the symptoms so astoundingly in this write. *big HuGGLES* from me. And Sven ...he did good didn't he, it looks just like you.  write on picnic pal Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Kethry for all the huggles and for taking the time to comment on this ...I think Sven deserves the recognition and I thank you once again.......ethome (huggles back to ya} |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Ethome, A masterpiece about a man who is a true "Princely" work of art himself. Elise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you athena for the comment. I know Sven will appreciate it. I don't know about the masterpiece word but I like the sound of it anyway. Ethome |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I just wanted to read this once again...I love when you write like this...straight from your heart |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Paula for such interest...I know Sven will be pleased! I wish you the best of holidays that a person could ever have..a soft kiss from me....ethome |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ethome~ You have done a fabulous job with this piece of poetry on our friend Sven. Sven is most certainly a talented poet and a treasured friend...thanks for appreciating his work and worth, well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ P.S Sven my friend you deserve this love ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Tracie thank you so very much for the thoughts that you express and I know Sven will appreciate them also...ethome |
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