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If I'm Dreaming
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If I'm Dreaming |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
If I'm dreaming do not wake me Let me go right on believing in this joy and happiness If I'm dreaming let me slumber Through the dark that came before you If I'm dreaming walk away without a touch Let me hold onto this feeling that you'll never let me go If I'm dreaming whisper softly Its your voice I'll always hear in the waking of my heart So if I'm dreaming do not wake me Let me slumber walk away without a touch Whisper softly while I'm dreaming |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ this is so gentle and soft.......I really love the feel of this.........  -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paula, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hmmm...been sleeping a bit, um, restlessly again? (grin) and how I know this feeling Paula. Great work. Keep it up! (grin, again...) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Paula.....dreaming can be so wonderful, love this soft tender penned piece. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soft and tender feelings do bring happiness..James |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This is just beautiful, and very sensitive. A lovely poem. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula love, this is sooo great, a soft and mysterious dream, and its the dream you want so very much. I really love this one love, utterly wonderful, and so well written too. Take care Mushy  Hey Kid, now those shoes, I do hope they are small because I take size 4, Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ So softly penned ... Shhhhhh ! 'If I'm dreaming let me slumber Through the dark that came before you' Dream on, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula, I love this! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic write Paula...so soft and dreamy and full of yearning for the one you love....good stuff there girl way to go!! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
This is really beautiful! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...it always makes me happy when I can touch you sweet lady...thank you Seymour...thank you sir for the kind reply Serenity...lol girl you always get that wicked lil grin hehehe...thanks Charisma...where would we be without dreams..thank you James...where would I be without your sweet reply my friend...thank you Shira...thank you for taking the time to read...and welcome to Passions Marsha...thank you sweetness...size four huh? well we will have to see what we can do Marge...mmmmmm...dreams are how we fly unchecked unfettered...and what better way than to love...thank you EagleOne...I am always happy to have you reading my poems...and when I can get this kind of response from you...well LOL WOOHOO...thanks ethome...mmmmm I just hope he knows its for him...thanks my sweet poet friend Tara...thank you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it !!!!!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I how he hears this as well. Such love should be alowed to blossom. This is beautifully tender. I loved it. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee Did I ever enjoy this poem. great work. Love and life, Richard |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
vandana...glad you did...thanks Startime...someday he will know thanks Richard...Im glad you liked it...thank you |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Good day. Excellent writing. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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